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The Woman In The Doorway ( Part Three)

Updated on March 16, 2010

The Guardian Angel

Mrs.Tuddley never had anyone to just stay and hold a conversation for a lengthy time as Jonathan did.Other than her son and daughter in the time of passing to check on her and the new store are to drop off Items for resale.

Jonathan and Mrs.Tuddley became friends.Jonathan had a quietness about him that Mrs.Tuddley liked.He seem to be at peace with himself.One day Jonathan came by the store to check on Mrs.Tuddley ,and she was sitting at the register in the doorway.Mrs Tuddley smiled when she seen him walking toward the store."Good afternoon Mrs.Tuddley " spoke Jonathan as he entered the store.I thought you could use a meal I brought you a BLT and a tea from Joshua's Mini Mart around the corner.Thanks so much Jonathan I was famished.I've been moving somethings around all morning.It's time I take a break.They both sat and had lunch together.

Mrs.Tuddley ask Jonathan if he would mind helping at the store when he is free.Just helping customers loading items or just looking over the store.She liked having him around to talk with.Jonathan stated he was looking for some work and he would love to do that.

A few weeks went by ; Joseph and Trisha came to visit their mother at the store and meet this fine young man she spoke so highly of.Jonathan was doing his norm singing spiritual hymns and working.Hello, They shook his hand and introduced themselves.We are so glad you are here.The kids was happy to have someone at the store with their mother not only to help but to give their mother some security so she wont be there alone .

Mrs.Tuddley and Jonathan had a real team thing going on at that store.Jonathan started bringing items to sell that he would find. Just an extra little income for himself.He really looked out for Mrs.Tuddley as if God gave him that as his job.Jonathan would stay with Mrs.Tuddley until she lock up to go home. He lived just a short walk from the store.





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    SwiftlyClean 7 years ago from Texas

    Keep going.........ralwus


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    ralwus 7 years ago

    Can't wait till the end now

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    SwiftlyClean 7 years ago from Texas

    yes it will Mickey Dee,It's coming....Thanks!:)

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    Micky Dee 7 years ago

    Very nice SwiftlyClean. Don't stop. This adventure should LIVE!