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The Writing Fades Away

Updated on November 18, 2013

I write your name on a dusty car window
as if that will bring you back to me
but the writing fades away
When the sky starts to weep.

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      Jamie Lee Hamann 3 years ago from Reno NV

      You hit the point with accuracy and precision. Jamie

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      CrisSp 3 years ago from Sky Is The Limit Adventure

      Nice flow...but I say let it go Jamie.

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      Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

      Wow, you say so much with little words. Superb. Dramatic in word and imagery.

      Up and more and sharing

      Hugs and love, Faith Reaper

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      Tijani Achamlal 3 years ago from Morocco

      CrisSp,

      Thanks so much for the visit and comment .I appreciate that .

      Have a nice day!

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      Tijani Achamlal 3 years ago from Morocco

      Dearest faith,

      Thanks so much for stopping by and commented.

      Tons of hugs and much love to You.

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      orange skys 3 years ago from Florida

      Great poem James. how have you been?

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      Tijani Achamlal 3 years ago from Morocco

      Oh You are here Yoppie Yoppie lol I thought you'd gone forever:) .I am OK Thanks for asking And you how are you?It's been a long time no see

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      orange skys 3 years ago from Florida

      I know been busy and really couldn't think of anything to write.

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      Tijani Achamlal 3 years ago from Morocco

      What you've written recently is astonishingly beautiful.I like your style.

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      JellyfishCurls 3 years ago

      Short and sweet, I like it :)

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      Tijani Achamlal 3 years ago from Morocco

      JellyfishCurls ,

      Thanks so much for your insight.I appreciate that! Voted up

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      Tijani Achamlal 3 years ago from Morocco

      jhamann ,

      Thanks so much for your insight.Have a great day there!

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      orange skys 3 years ago from Florida

      @ James as always thank you for your support, And your writing is amazing and inspiring. Love your poetry.

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      Tijani Achamlal 3 years ago from Morocco

      Diane,Sweetest friend:

      Thanks so much for being interested in my writings.I appreciate that so much .

      Have a nice weekend there!

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