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The laughing lie

Updated on August 10, 2011

The laughing lie


 Your excuse

Is shallow and followed quickly by a chuckle

Your pathetic
And O’ so low.
Do not come to me in all your self induced misery

I do not seek you

Out
Any longer.

Your face Is not seen when my weary eyes are closed and still.
I’m happy and relieved you pulled the trigger

In this wretched relationship's suicide darling

You did it all for me , I was merely your life jacket
In the rushing river of dying fish and toxic waste

That you so willingly dove into
So quickly unfortunately

You had cut your self deep and I was no more

Than your stitches and a band-aid

Sadly

Though I did love you
I was never in love with you

That Is what make’s our play of tragedy

For
Once
Just
Once

A

Comedy.

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      AshleyAutumn 5 years ago

      This is intense and beautiful! Just like you :)

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      David Walston 5 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000

      Thank you very much my dear friend.

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 5 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Wow!! Deep...Interesting read.

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      David Walston 5 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000

      Glad that you enjoyed it~

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      LeeLeePortCity 5 years ago from Wilmington

      love the free flow...i like to write in similar form :)

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      David Walston 5 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000

      Thank you very much LeeLee~

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      Stephiliboo 5 years ago from Liverpool, United Kingdom

      Interesting..Super deep

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      David Walston 5 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000

      Thank you Steph.. Very Much~

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      Jennuhlee 5 years ago from Pennsylvania

      "In this wretched relationship's suicide darling"

      BEAUTIFUL!

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      David Walston 5 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000

      Glad you enjoyed Jennuhlee ~

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      Fehl Dungo 5 years ago from close to you...

      What a slap in the end.

      Strikingly beautiful

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      David Walston 5 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000

      Thank you blaise~

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      Caroline Marie 5 years ago from Close to Heaven

      Love this one very much!

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      David Walston 5 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000

      Thank you for your read & comment caroline

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      Crystar 5 years ago

      Very interesting. I like reading yours.

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      David Walston 5 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000

      Glad you enjoyed it.

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      Joy56 5 years ago

      long time since i read anything like that, i must visit you more for sure......

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      David Walston 5 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000

      Most obliged.

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      Alexander Thandi Ubani 4 years ago from Lagos

      a most excellent poem and good choice of words...

      Glad i just read through your mind.

      Thandi

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      David Walston 4 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000

      Thank you.

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