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Updated on December 07, 2011
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Carrying a small diya (an earthen lamp) in her hands, Shilpa walked into the room, her profile illumined by the golden light of the lamp. She looked every inch a graceful woman in the prime of her youth. There was a certain sadness in her face, or was it the shadows cast from the dim light of the lamp?

Draped in a rich brocade sari in traditional red and gold, she looked like a bride, but not heavily ornamented in gold and diamonds as an Indian bride would be. The pearls she wore around her neck made her look regal, her sharp nose, which was a tad sharper than what it takes to look perfect, made her appear rather imperious.

As she placed the lamp on the lamp-stand and walked away, Prem looked at her attractive figure, he caught his breath, she was exceptionally beautiful in that light.Then he thought but proud and arrogant as always, she did not even acknowledge his presence. Did she even consider him a human being, he often wondered; did she have emotions? He was curious to know. She would never appear excited or happy or even sad. It was as though she were carved from stone, oh yes! he thought, so true to her name Shilpa (which meant a carving figure), she was beautiful enough to be a stone carving, that walked off the rocky walls of the temple. He was not sure if he loved her or hated her. He was positively livid at the moment. Did not courtesy demand that she smile or say namaste to him, her teacher he wondered.

Prem was her guru; he taught the great Indian classical dance, Barathanatyam. Shilpa was his perfect student, she replicated his every bodily move, every expression of his countenance she duplicated flawlessly. Did she ever feel the love that she expressed in her face, he wondered all the time. If she did not feel it, how could she even come close to perfecting such expression, he often asked himself. She was a mystery that walked, talked in monosyllables and perfected the art of expressiveness, without feeling it, he concluded. He was waiting for her father, the Zamindar (Estate owner, like a fief) who had called him for a discussion. The Zamindar, it was rumoured, wanted to put an end to his daughter’s dance classes.She was to be married, and taking classes from a young man could raise a few eyebrows among her suitors and spoil her chances of attracting the right man. Prem was in a way relieved, he could be free from this imposition on his time.He had become a robot, trying to each her the techniques of an art form which was expression of deep and beautiful emotions. The artist in him did not find its inspiration, it was a tortured restraint on his part. He loved to be the part he portrayed, he became the person. He was a man of deep emotions.

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Shilpa was resting on the peach colored velvet diwan (a low reclining couch) She had pulled up her legs and reclined with her head resting on the side board of the stylishly designed couch. She could feel his restlessness, as he moved his feet on the carpet of woven silky soft grass, as he waited. She wished she could be like him, expressive, loving, kind and humble, but her upbringing was different. To show emotions was below her dignity she was instructed; that was for the common people. To let it show in your face and words was sacrilege, it was letting your weakness be known. Prem was lucky she thought.Firstly he was a man and so he had no restrictions, secondly he could be all he wanted to be. Her heart lifted like a kite on a windy day when she would gaze at the changing colors of the sun at dawn..she wanted to skip like a fawn when she was amongst the flowers. Rama, her consort and guide would often tell her “Be still, reign in your emotions.” Shilpa hated her, but she knew that Rama was only the mouthpiece of her mother.

As she looked out of the window from where she lay, she saw the moon, shimmering in his silvery splendour, an odd bird called out to his mate..a mournful cry. As if possessed, she leapt off the couch and raced out into the courtyard, where the silver moon flirted, as though playing hide and seek among the palms, dancing and swaying in the coolness of the night. She looked all around, and assuming no one was there, she lifted up her voice and sang..a sweet, mournfully infectious tune. Rama rushed into the courtyard, “Sssshh child..strange men are around and you cannot sing like a love lorn creature,” she said.

“I shall do what I want” said Shilpa, rebellion stirring up within her. Rama knew when to hold her tongue, her mistress was like a lioness that had been tamed, but the wildness was still there, though it came and went in flashes. The feline energy was now sophisticated and reigned in well, but could get out of control when provoked.

“I will sing and I will dance, see if you can stop me,” she challenged as she released her beautiful, long, glossy black hair, restrained by a pearl studded clasp. Throwing the clasp to the ground, she lifted up her right leg, bent it at an angle and holding it steadily half way up from the ground in front of her, she struck a dance pose with her hands, lifting them over her head at an angle. Gracefully, she moved the dark orbs of her eyes to the corners. She looked like a Goddess who had been challenged by the elements, anger and power burning within. Her eyes met those of Prem’s at the end of the courtyard, when did he come there, she thought. Their eyes were locked together for a few moments.

You should not dance before strange men..her mind clamoured within her. “I shall” she said aloud “..do this and more”. With her index finger she signalled to her teacher. As he came near her, she took his hands and placed them around her waist as her stood next to her, indicating without a word that he join her in the classical dance form that he had endeavoured to teach her. She could feel the tremor of anticipation that ran through his body, as though fired by that excitement, she danced to the rhythm of her heart. Enchanted, he followed her moves. She had broken the unwritten laws of tradition and made him party to it. They would both die, she knew, but at least she would die in a show of courage, in defiance of all that is unjust and irrational. She had made up her mind, she decided to make the best of her time on the earth.She danced until the lance of tradition fell on her heart, she fell victim to ignorance and pride, but at least she fell with him whom she loved!


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      timorous 5 years ago from Me to You

      Hey sofs, nicely written short story. You've created a nice mood here. I also like Shilpa's free spirit and defiance against rigid tradition. Cheers.

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      Becky Katz 5 years ago from Hereford, AZ

      She decided to be true to herself. I wish all people could be.

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      Genna East 5 years ago from Massachusetts, USA

      "...until the lance of tradition fell on her heart" Ohhhh...I hope this was meant as a metaphor. The romantic in me hopes that they danced on, and on, and on...through life as well. Such a beautiful hub!

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      sofs 5 years ago

      Tim, my first serious attempt at story telling here.. I know I am not where I wish I could be at the art of story telling.. but sometimes you are inspired and I just ran with it...Thank you.. it is the spirit behind that story which was my inspiration. You are so kind sir!! Always!!

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      sofs 5 years ago

      Becky Katz.. welcome to my little world..I couldn't agree more with you... she couldn't live a lie.. She was her own free woman.. not restrained by traditions and times. I am glad that I chose her for my central character. Thank you for the support, as a novice this is encouraging!

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      sofs 5 years ago

      Genna, You are an awesome story teller.. thank you for even taking the time to read the work of a fledgling at the art of story telling. I am a romantic too... and I wish could tell you that she dance on and on.. but she did fall to that cruel cut of all....but not her spirit. It is her undying spirit that I celebrate here. Thank you and let me tell you again I appreciate this greatly!!

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      2uesday 5 years ago

      I really enjoyed reading this, the way you told the story was so vivid. I could picture the colors of the garments she was wearing. Thank you.

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      sofs 5 years ago

      2uesday, thank you... sometimes I get carried away by my own emotions.. I just found that the story could be even better with a bit of editing and did that.. I am learning and it is so lovely to see that my story resonates with others too.. I am going to be working harder on these than ever before.. thank you for your positive comments, I am encouraged.

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      Uma 5 years ago

      Sofs, this is really a beautiful story and the touch of "Indian-ness" captured my heart. A lady with a diya always oozes elegance with the traditional Indian saree and ornaments. Shilpa is a personification of modern Indian women(though there are exceptions). Thanks for sharing.

      BTW, that Ravi Verma painting is priceless!

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      sofs 5 years ago

      Glad to find you here... that is an Indian story to the core... Ah ..it is the romance associated with the image of a lady with diya that started me on this one...And yes...Ravi Varma..the master of the bygone years has been my inspiration in my early painting. Now he has become one for my writing... Thank you for taking the time and hope all is well with you :) God Bless!!!

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      Adrienne F Manson 5 years ago from Atlanta

      Sofs, You have shared a nice indian story here on the HP community site. Thank you for sharing your talent with us!

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      sofs 5 years ago

      Adrienne, these are my baby steps in creative writing, I am just heeding my muse and following the flow as it comes... thank you so much..I appreciate the comment :) Have a wonderful day!!

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