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The unwanted child

Updated on September 7, 2009

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The unwanted child


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Once upon a time he was left behind for the wolves unwanted

Thought to be a source of evil .A dark abomination, bewitched.

For he was simply undesired

For their envy they couldn’t hide

“The devil in himself”, full of pride

What a creature! He was discarded!

Some even wanted him murdered

The child without a name filled with hate

With time claimed darkness to be his fate


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Time rolls destines are made

Life dies all smiles must fade

The unwanted child rises to claim his right

To live a normal life yet seek revenge at sight

He was left once in the past

Dark feelings so deep so vast

He now cast every soul into eternal pain

Showed them how it felt, to go insane


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 “Father!  You called me an abomination cast me out

Now watch your home burn the life you had fade out

Oh little pathetic heaven tremble beneath my feet

Zeus watch your heavenly warriors blazing in retreat

Burn little angelic creatures let the flames lick your skin

Kneel to the master lay down your weapons hand’em in

Feel the wrath of hell summon you and cut through your flesh

Watch my dark demons gut you and drink you blood fresh


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Zeus’s face was expressionless

Showing not emotions wordless

“I’ll sit on top of the frozen heaven

But know that you’ve turned forsaken

 

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    • tantrum profile image

      tantrum 7 years ago from Tropic of Capricorn

      Really Good!!! I liked it very very very much !!!!

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      Uriel 7 years ago from Lebanon

      merci!..your..comments..are...well..appreciated!

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      Jess Killmenow 7 years ago from Nowheresville, Eastern United States

      An epic story. Well done.

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      Uriel 7 years ago from Lebanon

      thank you ! Jess

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      jayb23 7 years ago from India

      Absoluttely brilliant. You have expressed it so very well. I really marvel at your talent. Thumbs up

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      Uriel 7 years ago from Lebanon

      Oh Jayb thank you!

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      thanglynn07 7 years ago from Long Beach, CA

      Out of their fear and being threatened by his existence they created the very monster that he is. The outcast that became outraged by abandonment. Being unwanted...no where to belong to...A vengeful heart to bring upon judgement to the unjust! I'm cheering for you all the way! No one deserves to be mistreated. This could have been prevented if there was guidance...if there was love. Some people fear the unknown and turn their backs on those who are "different". Perhaps it is better to take the time to understand the individual, be a friend not a foe. I myself have had evil thoughts I so desperately try to suppress. Some people insouciantly speak with no consideration to my...condition. A man once told someone close to me that they can't deal with sick people. "It's too much work...why can't they just die already and let us healthy people live without having to take care of them." I was crushed and consumed with murderous thoughts...but no worries I would never act upon them...but it reminds me that we do live in a cruel world...

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      Uriel 7 years ago from Lebanon

      thanglynn07 , Yes different doesn't have to be bad. Lots can be prevented is some took the time and consideration to communicate and break the ice bridges that keep people closed among themselves. Being "different" can also mean unique and being one of a kind. If people regarded different in this aspect lots of conflicts and pain can be avoided. Sometimes it is what makes us different that makes us stand out and be ourSELVES.

      Indeed , we do like in a cruel world and we try our best to find peace and beauty as often as we could. But i learned one thing the beauty is in you and in me as well. Feel free to love yourself and to see the true beauty that lays inside. Being true to yourself and appreciating the true self in you is beauty to me. You don't have to fit someone's standards to fit in. i say: "you all laugh at me because i am different! I laugh at you because you are all the same"

      Look into your heart and see that you are a great person with/ without them. Make your mark proud in this life with blood berries soil or thought!

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      eyeofh 7 years ago from New Jersey

      Very dark...and hauntingly beautiful. Great poem!

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      Uriel 7 years ago from Lebanon

      THank YOu :)

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