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The Mundane Divine

Updated on May 31, 2012

Divine ached to be not defined.
All being laced with presence of time.

Time awaited arrival of divine.
Life arrived to be left defined.

Defined life co-conspired toward the divine.

Unacknowledged the divine had all the time.

Neglected into life itself.
All known was left to be accounted.

Time made sight to define the divine.
The divine never accrued to be defined.

Still time awaits the divine.
Until still time, give tale to define divine.


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      Mike Pugh 4 years ago from New York City

      I'm loving the new image here it is spectacular indeed. Nice!

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      BeyondMax 4 years ago from Sydney, Australia

      Awesome. Thoughtful and mind twisting. I was picturing zen garden in my mind and spending time exploring these thoughts...

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      Jaggedfrost 5 years ago

      This has the feel of a rap rhythm. I am sure the explanation of the interpolated thought here would fill pages.

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      cruelkindness 5 years ago from an angle view.

      Civil War Bob - Thanks for the welcome

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      cruelkindness 5 years ago from an angle view.

      Gypsy Rose Lee - Agreed, so what we do now?

      Always a pleasure to see you stop by.

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      Mike Pugh 5 years ago from New York City

      Exceptional poetry here, I love your word play on the whole divine aspect of life. Truly Divine!!

      Voted up and out.

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      Nithya Venkat 5 years ago from Dubai

      Wow interesting and thought provoking. Nicely written.

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      William Benner 5 years ago from Savannah GA.

      Very intriguing poem!

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      Civil War Bob 5 years ago from Glenside, Pennsylvania

      Good hub, CK...voted up and interesting. Welcome to HubPages. Thanks for following me.

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 5 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Time will always move on never giving us time to catch up.

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