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The Car Accident (limerick)

Updated on March 13, 2015

Remember the car accident

And all of the hours we spent

Beneath doctor’s care

In hopes to prepare

To find out what parenthood meant


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      Deborah Brooks Langford 4 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      well this one made me cry.. so sad. being a parent I prayed a lot when my sons started driving.. and the day my son had a wreck I thought I was going to go crazy. He totaled the car but he was fine but it could have been bad.

      hugs from Tennessee

      Debbie

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      Bill Holland 4 years ago from Olympia, WA

      You threw me a curve this time; didn't see this coming at all. A serious limerick? Good job my friend!

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      flashmakeit 4 years ago from usa

      You are a real genius!

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      Rich 4 years ago from Kentucky

      Mh -

      Can't go along with the rest of the comments. I see humor, with the accident being made in the back seat. Perhaps, I'm wrong, but there were many such accidents when backseats were used for more than just sitting. : ) Loved it!

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      Zulma Burgos-Dudgeon 4 years ago from United Kingdom

      I agree with Rich on this one. That was the first thing I thought of too. I guess this limerick works on a few levels. Good stuff.

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      Linda Crist 4 years ago from Central Virginia

      lol...I don't know what I read. This one is multi-faceted for sure. Whether the accident happened in the back seat or on the highway, it still made me giggle. Maybe I'm just warped.

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      Martin Kloess 4 years ago from San Francisco

      Sorry, I'm not revealing the secret of this limerick.

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      Linda Crist 4 years ago from Central Virginia

      I had a feeling you might say that. lol

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      Shining Irish Eyes 4 years ago from Upstate, New York

      Not sure this one is fully registering with me. I can not unravel the riddle!

      I guess you did well keeping this idiot (me) in suspense!

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      Randi Benlulu 4 years ago from Mesa, AZ

      And I agree with all of the above! I'm not sure...happy or sad, funny or ironic. I just know that it keeps me on my toes and looking forward to more!

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      picklesandrufus 4 years ago from Virginia Beach, Va

      were you making whoppie in the back seat!??

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

      I had to read it twice, I didn't get it, then i saw the meaning, ( I think ) I'm not about to divulge the meaning in case I didn't get it...HaHee

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Clever real clever. Reminds me of Meatloaf and Love by the Dashboard Light.

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      Susan Haze 4 years ago from Sunny Florida

      Short and right to the point. I loved it. It brought back memories of when my daughters first started driving. Then I began to think that maybe it wasn't a car accident as much as a back seat accident. Either way it's great.

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      hahaha!! very clever Mhatter! the best!

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      Karen Silverman 4 years ago

      lol..

      You don't tell us the end result of that car 'accident'..

      was it happy - or - were lawyers involved..

      lol

      cute

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      Glimmer Twin Fan 4 years ago

      OK - This one made my afternoon. I dept thinking of the movie "Christine" when I saw the picture. Totally unexpected ending! Ha!

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      moonlake 4 years ago from America

      Enjoyed this and enjoyed reading all the comments trying to figure this out. I have to go with serious, hospitals, doctors coming out to talk.

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      Vinaya Ghimire 4 years ago from Nepal

      Interesting twist! Just loved it!

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      Jose Velasquez 4 years ago from Lodi, New Jersey

      Those are the kinds of car accidents that can be blessings in disguise.

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