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The Mist (tanka)

Updated on November 4, 2015

Comfort is the mist

Which softens the bitter edge

In uncertain veils

Swept a maiden in its arms

That she might not see the truth


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      Dianna Mendez 23 months ago

      So very lovely. I think your use of the elf princess applies well here!

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 2 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Quite often the truth is out there but we are not aware of it.

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      Shauna L Bowling 2 years ago from Central Florida

      Wow, Martin. I was thinking in a totally different direction. That's the beauty of the written word: each reader comes to his/her own conclusion and perspective.

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      CrisSp 2 years ago from Sky Is The Limit Adventure

      Oh, the things we don't see when we intentionally do not want to see and more often they are all in the name of love. :)

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      saddlerider1 2 years ago

      Very nicely done, that she might not see the truth indeed.