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The Ocean (poem)

Updated on May 27, 2012

When sparkling moonlight mingles mid your hair

When stars reflect the magic from your eyes

When passion seems to rule the calmer skies

Then I know the oceans lingering there

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The tides of feelings senses on the rise

The sands of time that passes without care

The music flowing sighs that thrill the air

Then lovers kiss to whisper their goodbyes

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Goodbye to all the things they said were true

The things of others dreams and others love

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Goodbye to all the things I thought I knew

The things if other stream now flow above

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I drift upon a sea of loving you

And tomorrows are the ocean we dream of

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      Dorothy saltel 

      4 years ago

      Lovely music, So very relaxing. This was another wonderful poem. always a delight to read. Thank-you for this adventure.

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      Yvonne Spence 

      6 years ago from UK

      I love the ocean so your title drew me in! Some nice imagery here.

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      Dianna Mendez 

      6 years ago

      I peeked in here as your title beckoned me to come in. Love the ocean and it does create a great setting for love. Very lovely verses and photo.

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      YogaKat 

      6 years ago from Oahu Hawaii

      I am surrounded by ocean each and every day . . . your poem does her justice. Awesome video, words and painting.

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      B. A. Williams 

      6 years ago from USA

      The mystery of the ocean, love and caring, all in there.

      Well done!

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      Shampa Sadhya 

      6 years ago from NEW DELHI, INDIA

      Voted up and beautiful!

      It's a rich and wonderful poem. Loved it.

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      Ishwaryaa Dhandapani 

      6 years ago from Chennai, India

      A well-versed poem with a suitable picture and an interesting musical video! Well-done!

      Thanks for SHARING. Beautiful. Voted up & Socially Shared.

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      miss_jkim 

      6 years ago

      I was drawn in and captured from the first line. Beautiful poetry. Voted up.

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      B. A. Williams 

      6 years ago from USA

      The poem itself could become a song, its very musical when read.

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      Audrey Howitt 

      6 years ago from California

      Really a lovely write!!

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      Jessee R 

      6 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      I feel the moist sea winds

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      Victoria Lynn 

      6 years ago from Arkansas, USA

      I can see that. Goodbye to all the things we thought were...Beautiful!

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      Not Found 

      6 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Lovely and magical. I love the picture too, it adds to the beauty of the poem.

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      Tammy 

      6 years ago from North Carolina

      Beautiful poem! It has the quality of waves washing upon the shore in its lines. It is a pleasure to meet you here on Hubpages.

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      Shubhangi Joshi 

      6 years ago

      I draw my poetic influences from elements of nature, and I love that you've done that here. Beautiful!

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      Beth Perry 

      6 years ago from Tennesee

      An absolutely lovely poem. I could imagine this set to music!

      Voting up

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      Nichol marie 

      6 years ago from The Country-Side

      Very magical poem I love it voted up and beautiful

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      RunningDeer 

      6 years ago from Iowa

      Exquisite writing. Voted up!

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      Olde Cashmere 

      6 years ago

      Rich and beautiful poetry mhatter99. A lot of emotion in the words and it was a joy to read. The closing picture was amazing for this. Voted up, awesome, beautiful, and interesting :)

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      Gail Sobotkin 

      6 years ago from South Carolina

      Beautiful and bittersweet. Glorious love, togetherness and parting all with the background of the splendor of the ocean.

      Voted up across the board except for funny.

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      Deb Hirt 

      6 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      Beautifully said...

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      vespawoolf 

      6 years ago from Peru, South America

      The music, poem and painting flow together seamlessly, like two lovers whispering goodbye. Voted up, beautiful and awesome.

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      PurvisBobbi44 

      6 years ago from Florida

      Mhatter99,

      Exquisitely tender as the waves of emotion swirls over my mind to visualize lover’s goodbyes.

      Until their spirits meet again.

      I voted up, awesome and beautiful.

      Your Hub Friend,

      Bobbi

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      Merle Ann Johnson 

      6 years ago from NW in the land of the Free

      "The tides of feelings senses on the rise

      The sands of time that passes without care:

      Great poem with so much feeling, and the video was outstanding, it was a new song to me...and of course the ending photo was great, I have seen this person's art before, many great one's, at the moment I am unable to recall the name tho...can you enlighten me?...:O) Hugs G-Ma

      do you ever answer your comments?

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      BeyondMax 

      6 years ago from Sydney, Australia

      Such a beautiful poem, lyric to the core and so enchanting! Gorgeous pictures you picked for it, they blend so well together!

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      KDuBarry03 

      6 years ago

      The people i's very beautiful. The music goes extremely well with the poem :) Great job!

      -KD

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      Ann-Christin 

      6 years ago from UK

      Beautiful.

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      leigh anns page 

      6 years ago from New Jersey

      Wow, this is beautiful

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 

      6 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      what a beautiful picture it goes beautifully with your wonderful poem..

      I am sharing on Facebook

      Debbie

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      Joyce Haragsim 

      6 years ago from Southern Nevada

      Wonderful poem, Voted up and beautiful.

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