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The Secret In The Wind (poem)

Updated on July 7, 2013

A wind so soft

Blew across a lovely field

Bearing with it a scent

An ember of a memory

Come with me Come with me

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And every flower every tree

Shivered with excitement

Drifting there within the wind

Of a world which use to be

Come with me Come with me

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The hope and glow

Which flowed in time to warm that day

Renewed the promise of youth

Which a kiss of a scent set free

Come with me Come with me

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Here touched by thrills

Sweet moments passed

Such glory blessed the field

Such blossoms were reborn

Such unity was formed

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Yet mid their Joy came dew

The sparkle of their light

The rainbow of these days

Scents now familiar

Bound for forever

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So to the wind

They seasoned the scent with refrain

Which flows across other fields

Whispers once hoping to see

Come with me Come with me

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      Shannon 5 months ago from Texas

      Perfect timing to read this and to see the lovely picture you have accompanying this piece of poetry. It's almost bluebonnet season around here.

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      Victor W. Kwok 4 years ago from Hawaii

      Really loved it!

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      Deb Hirt 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      Ah, yes, I have been there myself. I had fields as a kid, and used to just lie there in the sunshine, allowing the warm breezes to flow, and the sounds to come. Then I would watch the clouds as they flowed by and dreamed the dreams of knights in battle and Father Winter with his flowing beard blowing that cold wind. I could go on and on, but I do see it well...

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up and beautiful. The wind whispers your lovely poetry. Passing this on.

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      Nithya Venkat 4 years ago from Dubai

      A beautiful poem about the wind,the wind holds many wonderful surprises for us to discover.

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      Patricia Scott 4 years ago from sunny Florida

      If we listen we can hear those whispers in the wind....lovely, enchanting..dear Martin...

      Angels are on the way ps

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      Deonne Anderson 4 years ago from Florence, SC

      You are a master at toying with the motions. I was totally swept up in the moment and for a time went to another place. Thank you for taking me along. The video added an hypnotic touch.....

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      Thomas Silvia 4 years ago from Massachusetts

      Very beautifully done my friend !

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      Devika Primić 4 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

      Good poem with a lovely touch of describing the wind chills

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      DJ Anderson 4 years ago

      Oh, you have outdone yourself on this one.

      An ethereal beauty flows effortlessly through

      you words. I really enjoyed it.

      Great job, Martin!

      DJ.

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Such a soothing effect, listening to the wind...Beautiful!

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 4 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      Beautiful is not the word for this.. maybe awesome and beautiful mixed together.. I can feel the wind my friend..

      blessings

      Debbie

      I wish I could give you a rose for this beauty

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      Michele Travis 4 years ago from U.S.A. Ohio

      I wish I could tell you how much your poems effect my emotions. You are such a wonderful poet.

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      Faith Reaper 4 years ago from southern USA

      Yes, very beautifully done here those whispers in the wind.

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      Shauna L Bowling 4 years ago from Central Florida

      I love the wisp of Nature in this poem. The photo and video are nice touches.

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      You have such a way of taking people along with you. I could hear the secret whispered in the wind. Beautiful!