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The Secret In The Wind (poem)

Updated on July 7, 2013

A wind so soft

Blew across a lovely field

Bearing with it a scent

An ember of a memory

Come with me Come with me


And every flower every tree

Shivered with excitement

Drifting there within the wind

Of a world which use to be

Come with me Come with me


The hope and glow

Which flowed in time to warm that day

Renewed the promise of youth

Which a kiss of a scent set free

Come with me Come with me


Here touched by thrills

Sweet moments passed

Such glory blessed the field

Such blossoms were reborn

Such unity was formed


Yet mid their Joy came dew

The sparkle of their light

The rainbow of these days

Scents now familiar

Bound for forever


So to the wind

They seasoned the scent with refrain

Which flows across other fields

Whispers once hoping to see

Come with me Come with me


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      shanmarie 13 months ago

      Perfect timing to read this and to see the lovely picture you have accompanying this piece of poetry. It's almost bluebonnet season around here.

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      Victor W. Kwok 4 years ago from Hawaii

      Really loved it!

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      Deb Hirt 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      Ah, yes, I have been there myself. I had fields as a kid, and used to just lie there in the sunshine, allowing the warm breezes to flow, and the sounds to come. Then I would watch the clouds as they flowed by and dreamed the dreams of knights in battle and Father Winter with his flowing beard blowing that cold wind. I could go on and on, but I do see it well...

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up and beautiful. The wind whispers your lovely poetry. Passing this on.

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      Nithya Venkat 4 years ago from Dubai

      A beautiful poem about the wind,the wind holds many wonderful surprises for us to discover.

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      Patricia Scott 4 years ago from sunny Florida

      If we listen we can hear those whispers in the wind....lovely, enchanting..dear Martin...

      Angels are on the way ps

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      Deonne Anderson 4 years ago from Florence, SC

      You are a master at toying with the motions. I was totally swept up in the moment and for a time went to another place. Thank you for taking me along. The video added an hypnotic touch.....

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      Thomas Silvia 4 years ago from Massachusetts

      Very beautifully done my friend !

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      Devika Primić 4 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

      Good poem with a lovely touch of describing the wind chills

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      DJ Anderson 4 years ago

      Oh, you have outdone yourself on this one.

      An ethereal beauty flows effortlessly through

      you words. I really enjoyed it.

      Great job, Martin!


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      Ruby Jean Richert 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Such a soothing effect, listening to the wind...Beautiful!

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 4 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      Beautiful is not the word for this.. maybe awesome and beautiful mixed together.. I can feel the wind my friend..



      I wish I could give you a rose for this beauty

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      Michele Travis 4 years ago from U.S.A. Ohio

      I wish I could tell you how much your poems effect my emotions. You are such a wonderful poet.

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      Faith Reaper 4 years ago from southern USA

      Yes, very beautifully done here those whispers in the wind.

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      Shauna L Bowling 4 years ago from Central Florida

      I love the wisp of Nature in this poem. The photo and video are nice touches.

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      You have such a way of taking people along with you. I could hear the secret whispered in the wind. Beautiful!