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The Stream (tanka)

Updated on May 26, 2015

Peaceful was the night

When the lovers found the stream

Wonder of the stars

Carrying soft crystal tears

Off to eternal ocean


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      Lee Cloak 2 years ago

      A charming piece, beautifully crafted, thanks for sharing these wonderful words, voted up, Lee

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      The Examiner-1 2 years ago

      Did they their tears drip into the water as they were washed out to the ocean? Whatever, it was beautiful and interesting. I voted up, shared and pinned it.

      Ken

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      Shauna L Bowling 2 years ago from Central Florida

      I can see the tears floating down the stream. Salty tears filling up the salty ocean. Beautiful!

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      Robin Grosswirth 2 years ago from New York

      The wonder of the stars

      crystal tears

      great poetic justice and imagery

      Robin