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The Sun Rose (poem)

Updated on August 1, 2012

The sun rose like most every day

Those things of the past far away

This morning bodes fresh things to say

As once more I rise to this play

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My senses say my love is there

Her scent brings a blossom to air

A kiss to remove worldly care

This dream that my heart now must bear

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What winds wait to welcome the day

What songs will our love tell to air

One wonders will time really care

When seasons of rain come to play

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I look toward my dream while it’s there

Its kisses are drifting away

Now silence has so much to say

And memories such pain to bear

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I think now what started this play

The note on her pillow won’t say

Oh why did my love go away

The sun rose like most every day

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      Joshua Zerbini 4 years ago from Pennsylvania

      Mhatter99,

      Powerful poetry here buddy! Thought provoker for sure!

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 4 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      My dear MHatter.. you are so awesome..

      the sun rose every day

      love sets most every way

      the kisses are so lovely man

      I count the stars among the sand

      cheers

      Debbie

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      Mark G Weller 4 years ago from Lake Charles, LA.

      Amazing message of memories in very few words. Well said Mhatter.

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      Faith Reaper 4 years ago from southern USA

      Amazing poetry as always. No matter what happens, the sun will rise again. Excellent. You are a master poet! In His Love, Faith Reaper

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      Olde Cashmere 4 years ago from Michigan, United States

      Amazing way with words Mhatter, another stunning creation. Voted up, beautiful, and awesome.

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      flashmakeit 4 years ago from usa

      You wrote another awesome poem again!

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      deergha 4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      very nice poem......well done. voting up and sharing

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      Farhat 4 years ago from Delhi

      to love their love one shud learn from you...and her memories in your poem tells it through!

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      This a beauty, M! Flowing with emotions...... Voting up!

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      Bill Holland 4 years ago from Olympia, WA

      I have tried since yesterday to open up this hub, but I was turned away by HubPages on each attempt. Finally I have arrived and oh, those damn memories....and the unanswered questions....haunting for sure, and you captured it all beautifully.

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      Patty Kenyon 4 years ago from Ledyard, Connecticut

      Awesome and Beautiful!! Emotionally filled with sadness however AMAZING JOB!!!!

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      Jo Alexis-Hagues 4 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

      Beautiful poem, beautifully done, powerful emotions.

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      Deb Hirt 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      So wonderfully and beautifully done.

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      Jamie Lee Hamann 4 years ago from Reno NV

      Very well done. The turn around in this set of poems is very well crafted. Jamie

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      This is so beautiful. Loved it.

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

      This is so beautiful and sad, leaving a note on the pillow, very visual. Loved it..*****

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      Karen Silverman 4 years ago

      Sigh..and life goes on...great poetry, martin!

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      stars439 4 years ago from Louisiana, The Magnolia and Pelican State.

      Awesome, unique, and wonderful are you're poems, and works, and this one too. GBY.

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      Janhorner 4 years ago

      All the comments have left me with almost nothing to say; because they say it all. Wonderful, and I never expect anything different from your beautiful poems.

      Jan

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      Ann1Az2 4 years ago from Orange, Texas

      Favorite line - "As once more I rise to this play." Dreams of Shakespeare, perhaps?

      Great poem, M.

      Voted up.

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