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The Sunset (poem)

Updated on November 13, 2013

Together we will touch the sunset

Of a moment too real to be real

And savor what a heart can conceal

From a day that has brought in this night


Searching the oceans of reasons why

Which has lead us away to meet here

So strange how they all disappear

In the veils of ever drifting sands


But here are we lost in something’s touch

Lost amid breezes we didn’t plan

Lost outside how this journey began

Maybe the sunset holds the answer


So we listen to each stroke of light

Each whisper in the silence all around

Each sand of heaven marvels at the sound

Reaching out across some long ago


There united missed remember when

There it was forever’s place in time

We touched endless meaning of sublime

And the sunset of that special kiss


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      Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

      Really lovely, Mh, that special kiss is hard to forget and leave glorious memories in the sunset of that special kiss. What an amazing and beautiful video too.

      Up and more and sharing

      God bless, Faith Reaper

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      DJ Anderson 3 years ago

      Being in love takes us to other worlds.

      We can count ourselves the fortunate ones

      to have lived in this special time and space reserved for lovers.

      You brought it home, on this one!


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      Bill Holland 3 years ago from Olympia, WA

      You had me with the first line...together we will touch the sunset...what a great romantic line that is.

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      Audrey Howitt 3 years ago from California

      Beautifully done Martin! Such a romantic at heart!

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      Jamie Lee Hamann 3 years ago from Reno NV

      Incredible lines here Martin. Beautiful and well written. jamie

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      Jo Alexis-Hagues 3 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

      Martin, so passionate. beautifully done.

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      Phyllis Doyle Burns 3 years ago from High desert of Nevada.

      Very romantic poem, with tender moments, Martin. I enjoyed reading it.

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 3 years ago from Southern Illinois

      This is beautiful..Loved it.

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      Romeos Quill 3 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      That timeless eventide of twilight reticence holds many secrets....waiting for the echoes of her barely discernible whispers are the drug which oftentimes keep the pen moving and animates the poet's velveteen chambers of reply, with the thudding laud of feint drums , awaiting the empyrean candle of impassioned brilliance conceived by another blessed, impending dawn to shower forth clues upon the beams of her bounty.

      A very pleasant read Mhatter.

      All the Best,


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      ocfireflies 3 years ago from North Carolina


      What RQ said. Smiles. Beautiful poem. Thanks for starting my day with romance and passion--great way to begin the weekend.



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      Bronwen Scott-Branagan 3 years ago from Victoria, Australia

      The world of young love is set apart and the lines between reality and bliss are lost in the mists of romance. A lovely poem.

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      Victor W. Kwok 3 years ago from Hawaii

      Really wonderful poem!

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      Eiddwen 3 years ago from Wales

      There united missed remember when

      There it was forever’s place in time

      We touched endless meaning of sublime

      And the sunset of that special kiss

      Beautiful Martin.


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      Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      With sweet memories of past sunsets Thank you

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      JPSO138 3 years ago from Cebu, Philippines, International

      Very romantic... It surely touches the heart. Great hub!

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      Deb Hirt 3 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      Sands of time and the hourglass of light ad sunsets will always be a door to step through.

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