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The Treasure (poem)

Updated on October 1, 2012

One day a treasure wash up on the shore

Just one of many there to share the sand

As morning broke their day would be at hand

And nothing knew what future had in store

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Then strangers happened to this magic land

They gathered treasures that the ocean bore

Our treasure thought that this is what it’s for

Its purpose here seemed clear to understand

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For unknown whys the strangers passed it by

It seemed so clear that it was like the rest

Till doubt set in to cloud its clarity

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Soft sunset for our treasure wind did sigh

It wandered through the wiles of cursed or blessed

Our treasure was then reclaimed by the sea

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      frogyfish 5 years ago from Central United States of America

      "For unknown whys..." , that hurt me for the treasure being left. Now you need to tell us why it was left...even though it was reclaimed by the sea...what is going to happen? C'mon, another poem. I loved that picture! Video music is light jazzy enjoyable, never heard the song.

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      Ishwaryaa Dhandapani 5 years ago from Chennai, India

      A wonderful poem! You composed this poem in an unique style of yours! Well-done!

      Thanks for SHARING. Beautiful. Voted up

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      picklesandrufus 5 years ago from Virginia Beach, Va

      Poetry is so hard for me to write, but you have taken it to an art!

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 5 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      This is just lovely. Makes me want to go treasure hunting.

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      Janhorner 5 years ago

      Interesting tale of treasure; always a mystery! Enjoyed the read!

      Voted up,

      Jan

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      Deb Hirt 5 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      As well it should be. It was brought by the sea, to be taken again by it.

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 5 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Ah, It looked like a special something, nobody picked it up and it returned to the sea..Beautiful..Loved it..

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      Shining Irish Eyes 5 years ago from Upstate, New York

      Perfect symbolsim that can be applied to many of lifes journeys as well.

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      Randi Benlulu 5 years ago from Mesa, AZ

      very, very nice. Keep them coming!

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      Darrylmdavis 5 years ago from Brussels, Belgium

      A sweet and simple poem...really enjoyed it

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      Michelle Yap 5 years ago from Philippines

      That's a really nice poem.

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      Linda Crist 5 years ago from Central Virginia

      I could almost hear the waves in the background. Nice!

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      Deborah 5 years ago from Las Vegas

      Beautiful Mhatter, I love your poems and they are so inspirational, voted up and awesome.