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The Wish (poem)

Updated on June 18, 2017

Here was a wish she made one night

This boy to love and hold her tight

To be her hope and guiding light

To be the reason all is right

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Who knew that wishes do come true

And with a tear he loved her too

Into her arms this boy now flew

Yet without wish what would he do

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In love they passed both day and night

Then in a time got married too

Her heart relaxed as moments flew

And something here just wasn’t right

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Now though he stayed forever true

Other’s arms would hold her tight

And for his love he’d leave on light

Till she felt shame what did I do

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She tried so hard to make wrongs right

What could she do to free her light

And as she died he held her tight

Here was a wish she made one night

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      Bumpsysmum 4 years ago from Cambridgeshire

      Stirring stuff, emotive and poignant.

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      Janhorner 4 years ago

      The happy bliss then the misery that love can also bring. Voted up,

      Jan

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      Shauna L Bowling 4 years ago from Central Florida

      Martin, what a beautiful portayal of betrayal and regret. Something we need to keep in mind with every breath we take and every selfish act we commit!

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      Linda Crist 4 years ago from Central Virginia

      This one made me cry. Another beautifully sad piece of art.

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Just beautiful.

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      very nice Mhatter, didn't know you had it in you

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Beautiful, I loved it...

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      Thomas Silvia 4 years ago from Massachusetts

      Another gem from the pen of Mhatter !

      Vote up and more !!!

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      lovedoctor926 4 years ago

      The women considered hot by most men's standards tend to take advantage of guys who like them. I'm with Philly dreamer here. It seems like she killed herself out of guilt. Wish you were here could also mean that only when you've lost something or someone can you really appreciate their worth.

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      jaydene 4 years ago from British Columbia, Canada

      Very moving, fantastic. :)

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      Shining Irish Eyes 4 years ago from Upstate, New York

      Oh so sad yet so beautiful.

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      Adam Bradford 4 years ago from Howell,MI

      loved it such a sad tale but filled with such great description, thanks for sharing.

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      Deb Hirt 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      Superb! This is a work of art, and may others learn from the topic.

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      Jose Velasquez 4 years ago from Lodi, New Jersey

      Did she kill herself out of guilt? That last part through me off.

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      Melissa Propp 4 years ago from Minnesota

      beautiful poem and beautiful song.

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      Sunnie Day 4 years ago

      This was so sad and very heartfelt. How many have missed moments as unforgiveness seemed so unreachable, then it is too late.

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 4 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      great poetry.. love it..

      sharing

      debbie

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      Deborah 4 years ago from Las Vegas

      Hey Mhatter, so stunning and sharp! Very cool! Shared, pinned, FB'd and voted up!!!