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Their Love Making Made A Chorus

Updated on September 6, 2013


Lust was hovering on the fringes of the room,

Yes, yes she was nodding,

and like a flower, it would bloom,

her hands burned at his throat,

and the warm sweat would coat,

fingers forcing their way into his collar,

a burning desire just taking it higher,

she gasped as they broke flesh,

her hair slightly pulled back and brushed,

her body aching up, breasts crushed,

their love consumed so much,

and it started with the simplicity of a touch,

but it was their hearts calling,

the room was warm,

eyes deepening,

and there was a log falling,

very slowly in the fire,

drifting downwards into the ash,

flames dancing higher,

and it would last the night,

offering just enough light,

just as a fire should,

as he was holding her tight,

there were tiny holes in the wood,

and in each of the tiny holes,

danced a flame amid the larger flames,

and what whispered through the room were names,

everything was right,

she was tender and he was strong,

nothing could go wrong,

their love making made a chorus,

and the chorus sang a soundless song.


© 2011 Frank Atanacio

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      Frank Atanacio 3 years ago from Shelton

      thank you fiona69

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      Margaret Fiona 3 years ago from New York City, USA

      What a nice poem. I like this so much

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      Frank Atanacio 3 years ago from Shelton

      Thank you Flourish and Theater girl for visiting my chorus.. and you Jackie... can't I have a softer side? LOL thanks for commenting :)

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      Jennifer 3 years ago from New Jersey

      Wonderful! I can feel this poem on visceral level. May we all be so lucky to feel this! I love your imagery!

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      Jackie Lynnley 3 years ago from The Beautiful South

      Yes, very beautiful...yet I await since hands are at the throat...there is another story here just waiting on Frank! lol ^ and shared.

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      FlourishAnyway 3 years ago from USA

      Absolutely incredible, Frank. Up +++ and sharing.

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      Frank Atanacio 3 years ago from Shelton

      thanks Bella :)

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      Erica Sanchez 4 years ago from California

      In awe Frank I loved it :) thumbs up

      Smiles :))))

      Bella

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      Frank Atanacio 4 years ago from Shelton

      lol thanks tobusiness :)

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      Jo Alexis-Hagues 4 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

      Frank, I must have missed this one......my word, when you burn, you sure burn :). Beautifully done.

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      Frank Atanacio 4 years ago from Shelton

      lol thanks justateacher

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      LaDena Campbell 4 years ago from Somewhere Over The Rainbow - Near Oz...

      Beautiful! Wonderful to see this side of you!

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      Frank Atanacio 4 years ago from Shelton

      I know right.. what did happen to me :) LOL thanks Lathing

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Wooh...... What a scene!! What happen to you, Frank?! The romantic side is peeping out :))

      Beautiful poem, with such a gentle touch...... Voting up and everything!!

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      Frank Atanacio 4 years ago from Shelton

      thanks Moms :)

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      Lissette 5 years ago from Central Florida

      Had to come read it again to offset the affects of your 'Diamond Six'.

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      Lissette 5 years ago from Central Florida

      Frank, I like to see you play and explore in your Love and Sensual side. Makes me want to melt.

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      Frank Atanacio 5 years ago from Shelton

      Thanks Marlene didn't see you up there :)

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      Frank Atanacio 6 years ago from Shelton

      thank you for reading Andsoforth :) Frank

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      andsoforth 6 years ago from Eugene, Oregon

      Well done! It's a piece I will read more than once...and share. Thanks, Frank...

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      Frank Atanacio 6 years ago from Shelton

      thanks Plant.. you must have a sad relationship sorry for you bro!

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      Frank Atanacio 6 years ago from Shelton

      thanks guys I think it was my attempt at something lighter :) me writing a love poem? LOL

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      Alexander Thandi Ubani 6 years ago from Lagos

      Beautiful rendition, excellent vision. That says it all. You re so creative, talented and awesome. These words can force one into the mood. . .

      Voted beautiful, awesome and interesting.

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      PoweroftheCross 6 years ago from Above and Beyond...

      Amazing poem. Hypnotic and heavenly and in such good taste. Voted up, above and beyond. Let the angels read it.

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      Forever In Love92 6 years ago from Orlando, Florida

      Vote up awesome, beautiful. you had me smiling all the way through. The imagery is amazing! their love making made a chorus. Good one Frank

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      platinumOwl4 6 years ago

      This sensation will only last a few moments. Then reality strikes and what once made you smile, now will make you cry:)