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Their Days (poem)

Updated on July 13, 2016

She waits for him in places long ago

In silence sits her sweet and faithful heart

She sees in him the one she use to know

Before their days have driven them apart

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He tries so hard to make the ends all meet

There is no time for pleasures of the past

He sees her cry and senses his defeat

Before were days which were let go too fast

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It seems that they don’t talk much anymore

The problems which they share they bear alone

They cannot see the key to answer’s door

So much in love they suffer on their own

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Yet in their darkness they reach out a hand

And pray the other still will understand

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      kjforce 4 years ago from Florida

      Mhatter99... and in todays' world it appears to get worse rather than better...everything has gotten almost unobtainable....that's because we have become a society of instant gratification , wanting what the generation before us has..without regard to how they sacrificed to reach today's best....true loves does suffer sometimes, although there are those special rare relationships that make it through , regardless....beautiful poem with words of truth..enjoyed very much

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      Devika Primić 4 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

      Love is painful and exciting sometimes love can make you cry too

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      Vinaya Ghimire 4 years ago from Nepal

      Love and longing in the poem makes this composition very beautiful.

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      Jo Alexis-Hagues 4 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

      Martin, so many couples will be able to relate to this beautifully written poem. Very sad but also profoundly true.

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      Audrey Howitt 4 years ago from California

      I think this piece touches us all -- we all hope that we will be understood--especially in the rough times--beautiful write Martin!

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up and beautiful. Topped off by Elvis makes it perfect. Passing this on.

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Wonderful piece and my favorite Elvis.....

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      Deb Hirt 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      I think that this fits many couples. What a description of life!

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      DJ Anderson 4 years ago

      I think too many of us have walked down that dark and

      lonely path. It is a slippery slope where most do not recover

      their footing.

      I cannot call this poem 'beautiful' when it is tumultuous in nature.

      I can say that you have done an exceptional job with this piece of work.

      As always, you bring your finest to the table.

      Thank you, Martin.

      DJ.

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      Shauna L Bowling 4 years ago from Central Florida

      I sure hope they work it out. It sounds like they want to hang on....

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      Faith Reaper 4 years ago from southern USA

      Heartbreaking, this one. So much in love, but suffering on their own. That should not be the case. There must be communication in order for there to be a relationship.

      Voted up +++ and sharing

      God bless, Faith Reaper

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      Devika Primić 4 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

      Communication is often overlooked in painful situations, so many can relate to this Poem.

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      Dil Vil 4 years ago from India

      Good read. i like the poem, thanks for sharing!

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      Rosemary Sadler 4 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand

      This is the story of many, beautifully expressed.

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      Mhatter99,

      This is absolutely beautiful and all too familiar.

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      Wayne Barrett 4 years ago from Clearwater Florida

      Great piece Martin. what a vivid description of the emotional struggle that so many couples endure. Thumbs up!