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There Was A Moment

Updated on May 5, 2013

There was a moment

When your eyes made me believe this would last

And that we were somehow immune

To the kind of storms I had faced in my past

But now time has gone by

And you're just not who I thought you would be

And I don't know when or why

I became someone you don't even see

And I can't help but wonder

Why I always deny summer will turn into fall

But perhaps it's better to be wrong about love

Then to never believe in forever at all

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      Bill Holland 4 years ago from Olympia, WA

      I'm reminded of the song by Garth Brooks....The Dance....."I coulda missed the pain, but then I would have missed the dance."

      Well done; really quite beautiful!

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      Joyce Haragsim 4 years ago from Southern Nevada

      I used to be like you until I found the man of my heart. There's hope out there that you can see it at the moment. It took me 14 years after my divorce to find my right man. We've been married for 24 years.

      Voted up and beautiful, Joyce.

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      Deborah 4 years ago from Las Vegas

      Beautiful Kosaugh, you are so talented! I could never write poetry, I'm to rigid I guess. I can really appreciate it in others though.

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      Kara Monterey 4 years ago from Indianapolis

      billybuc: Thanks! The Dance is a great song!

      writer20: So glad you found your right man! Maybe someday I will too:)

      eHealer: Thanks so much! I'm glad you enjoy it.

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      Martin Kloess 4 years ago from San Francisco

      I had my moment too, but I guess life got jealous of a dream.

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      Shining Irish Eyes 4 years ago from Upstate, New York

      Koshaugh - You are one of my favorite poets. This is a superior example of your ability to reach down into the readers heart and soul leaving me with a reflective feeling I can relate to so well.

      Voting up

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      Deb Hirt 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      So true. This piece was beautifully done. We must all reminisce from time to time, and be grateful for what we did have.

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Ah, have we not all had that moment when everything was perfect only to find that we were wearing rose colored glasses. Beautiful poerry. I can relate..

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      Rich 4 years ago from Kentucky

      Summer romance turned bad. Happens to the best of us. You did an exceptional job of making this a beautiful poem. Truly enjoyed!

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      Kara Monterey 4 years ago from Indianapolis

      Thanks so much!!

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      b. Malin 4 years ago

      What a Beautiful Poignant read "Koshaugh"...Sometimes, we have to Kiss a lot of Toads to find our Prince...He's out there!

      Every Man & Woman can Relate to your Thought Provoking Words.

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      Kara Monterey 4 years ago from Indianapolis

      Thanks!

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Just lovely and so true. As they say it is better to have loved than not at all.

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      donald_laue 4 years ago

      just lovely and so true, how i wish i can find the woman of my life as soon as possible. donald_laue@yahoo.com

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