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There was a place…… - a poem

Updated on December 26, 2012
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A road amidst thick fog

And a trip to never land….,

A night among lost thought

For some crib not to mend.

Darkest of dark lingering

To the far and wide horizon,

Then I reach deep down

To play memory crimson.

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Another night with the

Loud humming in euphoria,

Another journey full of

Choice filled with nostalgia.

Heart crying deep

To return to home so much,

It’s long enough of

Wondering in anguish lush.

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But there are no more

Pieces of warmth scattered around,

Roads are empty chore

For no face smiles to greet about.

I try to find the blue sky

Once again under the trees,

I cry to find the old time

Once again in the closed fist.

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The lost carefree laughs

And gossiping nights

Still do make noise in time present,

I wonder where my

Friends are now and

Do they also crave for the lost past?

Or it is better to loose

Self emotions

With feelings

With the time gone by…..,

Unanswered and cross

Questions do play

Cremation as

No shadows stand by!

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A place was so dear

A time was so near

Then it’s better to forget me.

A new day and a new face

A façade and a new race,

A drama of hilarious trace

Then I forget the mind crate.

I do carry the mist of forgotten path

And forget the present to sleep

In the yesterday….

Never to wake up

To touch the future.

Do not wake me up as

I do not want to fight again with me.

Then a place and some memory

with some time....

were rhyming....

"Forget me not" are blooming bright.

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      deergha 4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Many thanks James-wolve for stopping by here. Its indeed great to know that you have enjoyed the journey so far. Take care.

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      Great journey far surpasses anything I ever expected.I voted up.Thanks for sharing.

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      deergha 4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Dear shining , many thanks for your continual support here. Its very precious for me. It feels nice when I know that my effort is liked by who are important for me always.

      God bless you

      take care

      deergha

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      Shining Irish Eyes 4 years ago from Upstate, New York

      Beautiful reflective journey of poetry you presented me with.

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      deergha 4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Many thanks for stopping by and for your valuable comment here.

      Happy new year to you ....take care

      deergha

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      Jo Alexis-Hagues 4 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

      Beautiful emotive poem, I just love the way you chose your words to evoke the perfect image, 'I do carry the mist of forgotten path'.

      however, I'm with ImKarn, we should remember the the paths we have traveled, but always live in the now. I just love your poems. All the best to you for the coming New Year

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      deergha 4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Hey dear Jan,

      Many thanks for stopping by and your precious comment here.

      Happy new Year to you too

      deergha

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      Janhorner 4 years ago

      What a wonderful walk I have had Deergha, you words inspire me on. I really felt caught up in your words. Voted up,

      Jan

      Happy New Year!

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      deergha 4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Dear my friend ImKarn....many thanks for stopping by. Yes you are right....very soon 2012 will be just a memory. Your visit, comment is always much looked forward for.

      Happy new year to you also and take care

      deergha

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      Karen Silverman 4 years ago

      Quite the journey, Deergha...for a time i thought it was more a 'trip'..

      too many live in the past and waste away the future - live life for today, but that doesn't mean forgetting what's important to you - lke memories..

      (i think..lol)

      Happy New year my friend - soon 2012 will be naught but a memory...

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      deergha 4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Many thanks dear Gypsy for your visit , comment and passes always. You are a great source of inspiration for me.

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up and awesome. You've creatively taken me on an interesting journey. Enjoyed this and passing it on.

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      deergha 4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Thank you Mhatter for reading this poem. Your view is much appreciated here always.

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      Martin Kloess 4 years ago from San Francisco

      Thank you for this wonderful journey.

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      deergha 4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Many thanks @BlossomSB for you stopped by and read this poem. You are right but I simply love these flowers always very much.

      God bless you

      deergha

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      Bronwen Scott-Branagan 4 years ago from Victoria, Australia

      An interesting poem and good use of language and imagery. I love Forget-me-nots, but they can be a nuisance, too, their seeds can blow all over the place and then we have them growing everywhere!