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There was an ocean – the poem

Updated on March 28, 2013
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Tell me dear though afar

How it feels to be life of another

Yet an ocean but is it still there?

Do not know how to take it…

But one has to flow with the lore

It kills deep inside evermore.

Once upon a time….

And there was an ocean….

Cracking images of tired effort

These times if only can be lived

As if wishes dry in crave avid,

Still some feelings to be killed

Naysayers crest to be ruined

Cosset of ocean softly ardent.

Once upon a time

And there was an ocean….

No men’s land is harshly enslaved

A little wish cry to get freedom

Can the ocean wash away the scar?

Let tide flow into the enslaved affair

Caricature of an injured essence

Stopping yet another urge ego alter.

Once upon a time

And there was an ocean…….

Enslaved ocean without a trace here

Thickened cobweb of ignored heed,

U-turned enigma nonetheless freed.

Tell me here how it feels

To be captivated nostalgia afar,

Death is redeemed affair however.

Worthless captivated no men’s land

If only these time can be died!

Full stop and never a memory to hide,

From whom for how long and when to live?

No more ocean of dried hullabaloo,

Let it be another history of Waterloo.

Tell me how it feels

To be the reason of a dried ocean?

And let me tell you dear…

Once upon a time

And there was an ocean!

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      Wayne Barrett 4 years ago from Clearwater Florida

      Very beautiful poem, Deergha. The rhythm of the piece was like the flowing tide of the ocean you spoke of.

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      deergha 4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Many thanks @wayne barret for you made your time to stop here and comment. Glad that you liked it.

      God bless you

      deergha

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      Rayne123 4 years ago

      Wow the writing and words are amazing

      I really think this is published material

      Have a good one

      Laurie

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      deergha 4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Dear Laurie.....many thanks for you are tooo kind. Friends like you if like it here its enough for me than to publish. Take care and God bless you always

      deergha

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      Devika Primić 4 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

      Awesome shared in Facebook and Twitter, the photos are stunning and the poem has such great feeling

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      deergha 4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Many thanks @DDE always you make my effort to feel very complete. I cant thank you more. Your shares are much appreciated for. Glad that you liked it. God bless you always

      deergha

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      Nell Rose 4 years ago from England

      Wonderful poem, that flowed like the ocean that you spoke of, voted up! nell

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      Martie Coetser 4 years ago from South Africa

      I tend to read poems subjectively, and saw myself all of a sudden - while reading this poem - out of an ocean (of love), alone and dry, dying....

      Beautiful poem with many interpretations.

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      Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

      Beautiful and voted up.

      Eddy.

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      provident chauffeurs 4 years ago

      Really enjoyed

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      Rayne123 4 years ago

      In case I haven't told you I will tell you again, beautiful poems and perfect pictures

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      deergha 4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Dear Nell , your vote and visit is very much appreciated here. Glad that you liked it. Take care and God bless you always

      deergha

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      Dear Martie, many thanks for the way you have related with my feelings here. Take care and God bless you

      deergha

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      Dear Eddy ...glad that you liked it. God bless you always

      deergha

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      provident chauffeurs..........glad that you enjoyed it. God bless you

      deergha

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      Dear Rayne...........thank you for making your time to go through this one. Take care and God bless you

      deergha

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up and beautiful. Great poetry and pics.

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      Karen Silverman 4 years ago

      Honestly Deergha - your words need no photos - they paint quite the vivid picture all by themselves!

      I read much into this poem, my friend..

      voting up and sharing..

      have a wonderful Sunday!

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      Will English. 4 years ago from Marietta, Georgia.

      Pretty....

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      deergha 4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Dear Gypsy many thanks for your continual support here. God bless you

      deergha

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      Dear Leslie..........many thanks for you could relate with my feelings here. I am glad that you liked it. Your words are great inspiration for me always. God bless you

      deergha

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      Willsummerdreamer..........many thanks for your visit here.

      deergha

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      Girish puri 4 years ago from NCR , INDIA

      You turned enigma nonetheless freed...tell me, Awesome, deergha. Keep writing, God bless.

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      deergha 4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Thank you @girishpuri............for your visit and comment here. Gos bless you too

      deergha

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