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These Memories (tanka)

Updated on June 10, 2013

All these memories

Each one precious and so dear

Isn’t it funny

These monuments of moments

Change shape through my lover’s lips

More reflections by Martin Kloess


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      Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

      Love this!

      A lot said in so little words.

      Voted up +++ and sharing

      God bless, Faith Reaper

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      Shauna L Bowling 3 years ago from Central Florida

      This on really made me think. I'm still not sure I get it tho.

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      Cat 3 years ago from New York

      'Monuments of moments' - I love that!

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      travmaj 3 years ago from australia

      Yes, - those past photo's can change shape depending where we are in life -nothing stays the way we want it.

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia


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      Jo Alexis-Hagues 3 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

      Martin, a beautiful tanka ......on reflection, we can see how time changes our perspective, but those tender moments lives on.

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      Deb Hirt 3 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      I loved this one!

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      Shannon 3 years ago from Texas

      Good one!

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