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They Forget

Updated on May 23, 2010

Its inside the mind and it flutters

And sings to them the meaning

Try and try even harder

Those who weep it whispers for

Soothing their shallow hearts beat.

"Shhh It’ll all be fine"

We all slip and fall to the long crawl

Not forever only their time will tell.

Our minds yell its going to be fine.

For they the many who

Want it when its bad

And forget it while its good.

It whispers yet again for

I wont be there

But you will.

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      Joy56 6 years ago

      i am finding your work varied but always extremely interesting

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      Nellieanna Hay 6 years ago from TEXAS

      Very sad and meaningful.

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      lalesu 6 years ago from south of the Mason-Dixon

      "We all slip and fall to the long crawl" - The entire poem is beautiful, but god! that line slammed straight to the back of my head!

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      Tara Tufford 6 years ago from Columbus, Ohio

      Very Sad Awful-and yet I feel it speaking directly to me....beautiful..

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      David Walston 6 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000

      Thank you for the

      kind comments

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      Fehl Dungo 6 years ago from close to you...

      Deep and provoking. It'll all be fine :)

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      David Walston 6 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000

      Most obliged blaise

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      Micky Dee 6 years ago

      It'll all be fine! Thanks!

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      Debarshi Dutta 6 years ago from Calcutta

      Whatever the poem was about,

      I guess it was a good poem.

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      David Walston 6 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000

      No Poem Here

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      Leptirela 6 years ago from I don't know half the time

      Truly deep , dark and moving.

      I feel you have it.

      :)

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      David Walston 6 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000

      Thank you

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      seraphim11 6 years ago

      beautiful words.

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      David Walston 5 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000

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