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Thine Eyes

Updated on March 24, 2013
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I ask thee to bear thine eyes before me,

Let me see what they may offer.

May mine own truly parallel thee

In the shade of thine iris softer.

Specks of brown and luminous gold

In the faded light untold

Accented, entreated and sumptuously bold

Nothing there that may be cold.

I hearest thine song, O siren mine,

No need for any more silent tears;

Ye may release thine c’oeur in kind,

Those days have pass’d for untold fears.

And I willst promise forever to thee

Mine own heart and soul unscathed,

If ye hast will to return to me

Thine loving spirit willst remain pure and untainted.

‘Tis thine time for untold pleasure

This will be the era for thee,

Though nothing truly lasts forever

Walk with me for the best is yet to be.

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      Rizwana Yasmin 3 years ago from Lahore

      No thanks ! and deep something there !

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      Deb Hirt 3 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      Riz, I'm told that I write descriptive material. Thanks.

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      Rizwana Yasmin 3 years ago from Lahore

      unique expressions Deb

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      Deb Hirt 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      Thanks, Frank. Glad that you were able to see it.

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      Frank Atanacio 4 years ago from Shelton

      a very well written piece here aviannovice :)

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      Deb Hirt 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      Thankee, Leslie! The proof is in the pudding, and I can make a darn smooth one...

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      Karen Silverman 4 years ago

      You are as flexible as you are brave and creative, my friend! Nothing lasts forever, but, as long as we give it our best!

      So impressed!xx

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      Deb Hirt 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      Anna, I wish you could share the lake with me. No, wait a minute, you CAN. I post pictures almost daily. Stop by here and follow me: http://debhirt.blogspot.com

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      Anna Haven 4 years ago from Scotland

      Beautiful words and I do love archaic language.

      I took peace, a feeling of wholeness, and belonging from your words.

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      Deb Hirt 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      This was one of the first things that I put on Hubpages...for some reason, it never went too far. Thought that I'd spread it around a little, and it gave it a little more exposure.

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      Linda Compton 4 years ago from The Land of Enchantment

      Hey Deb,

      What fun! Beautifully rendered...a nice mix of romance, mystery, longing and mutuality. I think you must have been listening to mating calls all day :~))

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      Deb Hirt 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      I actually don't need any person to walk with me. I am one with nature, and what I see there defies anything that humanity could ever hold a candle to. Thanks for visiting, and your heartfelt comment.

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      Deb Hirt 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      No, not that scenario. I wrote that years ago, while in Maine. Must have been the clean air that got the creative juices flowing in the country. I actually wrote quite a few things during that time period.

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      ALUR 4 years ago from USA

      For a poem to sway me takes much and this one has me swaying and swooning. Ah, the poet will always call for his match in life and often walks by without knowing their paths may have already crossed. I wish you find that soul to walk with you. Perhaps you'll relate to my own writing esp "A Simple Request"

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      Karen Silverman 4 years ago

      well, you are full of surprises my friend! i do believe that the best is yet to come..

      i don't know why but i saw a mother and child here..

      sharing

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      Deb Hirt 5 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      Thanks, Lela! I'm glad that you enjoyed the sentiment here.

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      CreatePerfection 5 years ago from Beautiful Colorado

      Those we hold dearest show us the universe in one look, one touch, one embrace. Beautiful

      Blessings,

      Lela

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      Deb Hirt 5 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      Thank you, girishpuri! I do a poem or two once in a while, but I'm really not much of a poet.

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      Girish puri 5 years ago from NCR , INDIA

      The best is yet to come, awesome

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      Deb Hirt 6 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      Thanks, kashmir! I haven't had that much experience with poetry, so sometimes, you just have to take the plunge.

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      Thomas Silvia 6 years ago from Massachusetts

      Such a very beautifully written poem which i have enjoyed reading !

      Vote up and more !!!

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