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This Moment (poem)

Updated on August 24, 2014

When

And then

It will start

A beating heart

As moods awaken

Feelings unmistaken

Anticipation growing

Amid the wild dreams now flowing

Passion promises something that’s new

But for this moment all cares come from you

But for this moment what is really true

Here in this moment timeless rendezvous

And for this moment flowers dawn their dew

Passion’s promise dreams already knew

Where our memories are growing

That’s were we now are going

And heaven was shaken

By chances taken

Playing our part

With our heart

Open

Then

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      Jose Velasquez 5 years ago from Lodi, New Jersey

      This one had really nice rhythm. I liked how you built up and then went back down.

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      Deb Hirt 5 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      Beautifully done in the shape of an arrow. It takes talent to do what you did. Keep it up.

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      WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona

      Very nice! I'm impressed!

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      anglnwu 5 years ago

      Love it. You cleverly built up the anticipation and bring it down--the beauty of love when hearts are open.

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      Tracia Bussey 5 years ago from Southern USA

      I enjoyed this poem, mainly because of the rhythm and rhyme. The flow was nice with a very interesting build up, then decrease. Impressive work. Voted up, awesome & beautiful! God bless!

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      Michele Travis 5 years ago from U.S.A. Ohio

      Wonderful poetry, you have a talent and that is a very good thing. Voted up!

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      Rosemary Amrhein 5 years ago from Boston, MA

      Nice work here

      thanks :)

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 5 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up and beautiful. Love the rhythm and flow of this poem. Love these lines

      Where our memories are growing

      That’s were we now are going

      Speaks of love and promise. Just great.

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      Ann-Christin 5 years ago from UK

      A really nice poem:)

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      Shining Irish Eyes 5 years ago from Upstate, New York

      You are quite creative in more ways that one. Beautiful poem and creative shape of the arrow (perhaps Cupids arrow) while telling a touching love story.

      Voting it up

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      Merle Ann Johnson 5 years ago from NW in the land of the Free

      The slow build up then the fast beating and the slow down, relaxed and enjoyed...:O) Hugs G-Ma

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      Jo Alexis-Hagues 5 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

      Beautiful poem, cleverly done.

      Impressive!!

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      Vincent Moore 5 years ago

      Well done, your creativity and imagery was beautiful. Love stories are fun to scribe, your performance was marvelous. Voted UP and awesome.

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 5 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      Well at this moment this is a great poem...voted up....debbie

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      Sharon Christy 5 years ago from India

      Awesome poem! I loved the shape, it must have required effort to do that, you are such a talented writer! Glad to be following you!

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      Peggy Woods 5 years ago from Houston, Texas

      Enjoyed your poetry and the video at the top perfectly set the mood. Voted up and beautiful.

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      picklesandrufus 5 years ago from Virginia Beach, Va

      A lovely poem indeed! I liked everything about it.

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