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This Path (poem)

Updated on October 7, 2012

Let’s dance down this path of dreams that come true

Where showers of flowers help guide our way

While mist laced with kisses help guide our play

Then whispers of wishes hint what to do

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Let’s chance our own path where streams of light stray

Around every turn a world which is new

Where I may explore a world which is you

As heartbeats repeat one more special day

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Dark clouds and shadows may cause us to slip

And ill-conceived lies may confuse our trip

And torrents of doubt may into us rip

Till hope’s tender tears our kisses will sip

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Let’s dance down this path our gift from above

And show the whole world a couple in love

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      Glenn Stok 2 years ago from Long Island, NY

      Ever so meaningful poem. And the dance video was great too.

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      Maria Jordan 4 years ago from Jeffersonville PA

      What a beautiful and lilting style with dramatic visualizions to accompany. Voted UP and ABI.

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 5 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up and beautiful. Let dance and be happy.

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      Movie Master 5 years ago from United Kingdom

      Wow - fantastic video and poem - voting up and awesome!

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      Karen Silverman 5 years ago

      i love your path, Martin - mind if i join you?

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      Eiddwen 5 years ago from Wales

      Dark clouds and shadows may cause us to slip

      And ill-conceived lies may confuse our trip

      And torrents of doubt may into us rip

      Till hope’s tender tears our kisses will sip

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      Let’s dance down this path our gift from above

      And show the whole world a couple in love

      Great words my friend.

      Eddy.

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      Marites Mabugat-Simbajon 5 years ago from Toronto, Ontario

      MHatter, this is awesome! I love to share this poem and video. The bottom photo also really hits the last two lines.

      It needs two to tango, to samba, to salsa, to cha-cha, to boogie, to waltz, be it in dance or something else, to move together to fulfill a dream. To hold on together, to guide together, to fall in love like soulmates; to know how to give and take, to be both unselfish and both forgiving...is the path to a harmonious and loving relationship.

      Again, I love this hub! Awesome/Beautiful!! Sharing and pinning!

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 5 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Martin, This is lovely. The dance video was fantastic..Loved it..Awesome!!

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 5 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      MHatter that was wonderful .. I wish i could dance like that.. I have always loved dancing and I used to do it professionally but i don't think I was ever that good.. and to be in love and dance like that.. what a wonderful hub and poem and the video is the best. thank you

      sharing

      Debbie

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      Deb Hirt 5 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      Now this was done in an interesting tone.

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      Deborah 5 years ago from Las Vegas

      Romantic and Dramatic! Beautiful and I am definitely sharing this one.

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      drbj and sherry 5 years ago from south Florida

      Really sweet, tender poetry, Mhatter, and really HOT video. Perfect combination.

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      Jo Alexis-Hagues 5 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

      Beautiful love poem, I especially loved the last couplet. You old romantic....:))

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      wetnosedogs 5 years ago from Alabama

      That was a wonderful video. Enjoyed it and your words.

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      Rich 5 years ago from Kentucky

      Like a dance, life is filled with the tough and the frantic. It's making it thru those times and enjoying the total package is what matters. Great Job!

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      Michele Travis 5 years ago from U.S.A. Ohio

      Love and beauty. But then your poems are wonderful and so many people love them.

      Thank you for sharing this with us.

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      deergha 5 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      A romantic poem dancing beautifully ........very captivating. Thank you.

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      Farhat 5 years ago from Delhi

      dance with love.... lovely portrayal.... !

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      Linda Crist 5 years ago from Central Virginia

      A beautiful canvas painted with words.

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      Faith Reaper 5 years ago from southern USA

      Hi Mh, another very romantic poem overshadowed by dark false imaginations. Love the dancers in the video they were outstanding and energizing. Nice black and white photo at the end, very dramatic. Voted Way up, except funny of course. God bless. In His Love, Faith Reaper

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      K.A.E Grove 5 years ago from Australia

      a dance trhough romance this is a beautiful love poem that swept throught my mind like an enticing breeze

      simply lovely