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Time: A Poem

Updated on February 10, 2014


Time,

Broken into pieces,

Seconds, ignored,

Minutes, counted,

Hours, noticed,

Days, wasted,

Weeks, lengthy,

Months, celebrated,

Years, remembered,

Time,

Broken into pieces,

Moments, shared.


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      Martin Kloess 4 years ago from San Francisco

      cleverly done. Thank you

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      Erin Bower 4 years ago from Georgia

      Mhatter99: Thanks! You're welcome. :)

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      Valleypoet 4 years ago

      Really liked this...simple but very well crafted:-))

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      Erin Bower 4 years ago from Georgia

      Valleypoet: Thank you! It is simple and short, but I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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      Wayne Barrett 4 years ago from Clearwater Florida

      Very nice piece...or should I say, "timepiece" ( :

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      Bronwen Scott-Branagan 4 years ago from Victoria, Australia

      A lovely, simple poem, well-written. Enjoyed it.

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      Nathan Bernardo 4 years ago from California, United States of America

      Beautiful poem: Simple, succinct, meaningful.

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      Erin Bower 4 years ago from Georgia

      wayne barrett: Thanks! Haha; good joke.

      BlossomSB: I'm glad it brought a smile to your face. :)

      NateB11: Those are great adjectives. Thank you!

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      Kristen Mazzola 4 years ago from South Florida

      I really enjoy your writing! This poem is fantastic!

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      Erin Bower 4 years ago from Georgia

      khmazz: Thanks so much!

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      gaplumber 4 years ago

      I get in trouble all the time for writing short and sweet, you confirm my beliefs, get it up and out.

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      Erin Bower 4 years ago from Georgia

      gaplumber: Thanks for commenting!

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      ocfireflies 3 years ago from North Carolina

      short, but still evocative-thank you

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      Erin Bower 3 years ago from Georgia

      ocfireflies: Thanks for appreciating this!

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      ahorseback 3 years ago

      Very nice ! really !..........:-}

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      Erin Bower 3 years ago from Georgia

      ahorseback: Thanks! :)

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      Ann 3 years ago

      I have no answer about time .but I love the way you write about it.

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      Erin Bower 3 years ago from Georgia

      Ann: Yes, time is very mysterious. Thank you!

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