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Timeless Memory (poem)

Updated on November 12, 2012

Recall the wind now far away

That brushed across the silver sand

To form a timeless memory

There by the ocean’s side

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Tomorrow was another’s day

There seemed so much we had at hand

The world was formed for you and me

We floated on such pride

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There every dream was at our sway

Another’s wish at our command

We marveled at such clarity

A rollercoaster ride

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The winds of time did blow our way

So much once us they did disband

The sweetest songs of what can be

Was taken by the tide

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Yet past those shadows of dismay

Amid so much which wasn’t planned

The moments lost to wind its fee

Our love has never died

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Recall the wind now far away

That brushed across our life so grand

And left me with a memory

To whisper with my bride

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      Bill Holland 5 years ago from Olympia, WA

      I get so wrapped up in your limericks that often I forget to read your poems, and that is a loss for me. This is beautiful, and that is coming from a person not fond of poetry.

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      Joshua Zerbini 5 years ago from Pennsylvania

      Mhatter99,

      Very beautiful poetry wrapped up in powerful imagery! Awesome choice for picture as well!

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      Mark G Weller 5 years ago from Lake Charles, LA.

      Beautiful words and memories!

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      flashmakeit 5 years ago from usa

      Romantic memories are a treasure and so was your poem awesome!

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      Skyler DeCristoforo 5 years ago from Olympia, WA

      Beautiful and brilliantly expressed! Wonderful job. Voted up!

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      Farhat 5 years ago from Delhi

      love is like this..never ending , endured with repeated timeless memories ! ...wow!!

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      shalini sharan 5 years ago from Delhi

      i loved these timeless memories, and as it has do with love, it is a cherry on the cake

      great work

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      Jools99 5 years ago from North-East UK

      Wonderful poem, words carried along on a gentle ocean tide, 'There every dream was at our sway'...how I wish I had written that line :o)

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      Thomas Silvia 5 years ago from Massachusetts

      The words you used in this wonderfully written poem describe timeless memories so beautifully !

      Vote up and more !!!

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      Olde Cashmere 5 years ago from Michigan, United States

      Such a joy to read your poetry Mhatter. Voted up, awesome, and beautiful.

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      Sueswan 5 years ago

      Hi Mhatter99

      True love survives the storms.

      Beautiful, precious and romantic.

      Voted up and away

      Take care :)

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      Mike Pugh 5 years ago from New York City

      Beautiful music here, and lovely poem for a married couple, I will ask my wife to check this poem out to, smooth.

      Voted up and getting shared.

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      Susan Zutautas 5 years ago from Ontario, Canada

      The flow of your poem along with your words was absolutely beautiful.

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      Deb Hirt 5 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      Memories can be such beautiful things. We all build them.

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      Tammy 5 years ago from North Carolina

      This is a beautiful poem! All love should be this durable.

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 5 years ago from Southern Illinois

      This is the most beautiful one. Your words are magical and true...

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      Jim Higgins 5 years ago from Eugene, Oregon

      Wonderful poetry, Mhatter!

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      Melanie Chisnall 5 years ago from Cape Town, South Africa

      Your words flow like the wind - truly beautiful!

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 5 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up and beautiful. This is such a romantic poem.

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      picklesandrufus 4 years ago from Virginia Beach, Va

      So gentle and loving. Really felt as though I was floating on your words. Beautiful.

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      PurvisBobbi44 4 years ago from Florida

      That was so sweetly worded to take ones breath away. Great work as always.

      I voted beautiful and awesome. And tweeted it to share with all my followers.

      Your Hub Friend,

      Bobbi Purvis

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      Dianna Mendez 4 years ago

      You have a beautiful way of writing. Your passion in poetry really makes for great reading. Such a beautiful poem and could make a great Valentine's Day card insert.

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      Ann1Az2 4 years ago from Orange, Texas

      M, another romantic poem. Beautiful. Voted up.

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