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To Ask Why

Updated on May 2, 2010

Beautiful pretty caring giving sweet sweetie!

Graceful understanding dearest misunderstood dear!

Honey waiting cute cutie awaiting Hon thoughtful darling thoughtless!

Doll peach honest honesty honestly deceitful something someone dare somewhere!

Nothing babbling nonsense gratefully lucky blessed luckily lovely loving lover!

Breaking sinking broken piece taped glued saved erased!

Lonely loner sad depressed depressing dead death doing don’t please

Do why you who spite wind light rain pray prayed prayers played!

Past passed passive posed fake faking possessive faithful fun paradox!

Say said forgotten gone goodbye hello missed missing memory alive!

 

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      Sapphire Fisher 7 years ago

      very good when this is all over you need to publish your poetry David I think you can make a career outta it!

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      Michael Shane 7 years ago from Gadsden, Alabama

      Wonderful read!

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      Sunshiney31 7 years ago

      This is great I love it and I agree with comment number 1 you need to get this stuff published...bravo really great stuff..

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      David Walston 7 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000

      Thank You So Much

      For Your Support Guy's!

      Wouldnt Have The Slightest

      Clue Where To Start Though.

      These Are Only A Few Of The Finished.

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      pinkhawk 7 years ago from Pearl of the Orient

      ...wohhh this is cool!, it gives me a new experience in reading poetry...thank you very much for sharing! ^.^..

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      kimberlyslyrics 7 years ago

      Thank you David

      very creative and very telling

      Kimberly/lyrics

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      getmyback 7 years ago

      I have to agree with Kimberly, very creative indeed.

      thank you

      billY

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      David Walston 7 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000

      You Words Mean

      SO.. Much Guys~

      And Thank You

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      seasoning 7 years ago

      you truly are awful, but i am liking your work....

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      David Walston 7 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000

      That I am..

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      Tara Tufford 7 years ago from Columbus, Ohio

      Incredibly creative, but I definitely enjoyed it:)

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      David Walston 7 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000

      Glad To Hear Tara!

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      poetlorraine 7 years ago

      nice, nice nice nice nice......

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      David Walston 7 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000

      Thanks Thanks Thanks!!!

      @PoetLorraine!

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      truster 7 years ago from A Bed of Roses

      Missing memories. Isn't that scary ?

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      David Walston 7 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000

      Very True @ Truster

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      truster 7 years ago from A Bed of Roses

      Yes ! I can't remember where I know you from ! LMAO

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      Real Fantasy 7 years ago from Cleveland

      Such an interesting poem. I like the format a lot! It's something different and so... I can't find a word right now but it's great!

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      David Walston 7 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000

      Thank you

      @real fantasy

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