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To Sapphire

Updated on January 20, 2012

Broken Dreamer


You have the life experience

that would put fiction to shame.

a vivid imagination

that words could not explain.


The wrong thing at the wrong time

BrokenDreams, they are

the beautiful thoughts in your head

as your'e traveling in your car


You alter the shadows with your mind

you move the creatures and the tree's.

Mother nature, sometimes is envious

But she admires what you see


When will you know you love someone

when they can make you sad,

when your heart is hit with such a force that it hurts inside

Why, because strangers would never hurt someone that bad.

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      Jen Christopherson 5 years ago from Oklahoma, USA

      Sorry, too many episodes and life to get to see it sooner. I love it! I wish I could write poetry that well!!!! Maybe have something to do with being stuck on grammatical rules!!! giggle

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Well it's about time . I thought you would never visit.

      I'm VERY GLAD you like it , I thought you didn't comment because you didn't like it .Now I am happy.

      Much Love

      Michael

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      Jen Christopherson 5 years ago from Oklahoma, USA

      OMG!!!! I love this poem! Thank you so much! I apologize for not checking for it sooner! And, boy! Have I paid the price for it! Thank you so much Cleaner3!!! And thank you for the wonderful praise as well! I am extremely blessed! Thank you!

      And Always Exploring, yes. I have known great pain, indeed... almost as much as I have given others.

      Have I mentioned that I love this poem?!? lol

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      @ eddy,thank you for comments. I always look forward to what you say

      @ Explorer, thank you,glad you like it.Sapphire is a beautiful person and a great writer with much potential.

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 5 years ago from Southern Illinois

      I like Sapphire's vivid imagination..Has she known pain? I think so..Great poetry..

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      Eiddwen 5 years ago from Wales

      Hi a great poem consisiting of great words and picture.

      You are a great writer and here's to so many more to share on here.

      Take care and enjoy your weekend.

      Eddy.

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      A broken sensation?

      Let me see, Her name is Sapphire, she rolls with the tag of Dreamer.

      A special connection there was

      It gave us such a buzz

      But only we would know this

      because it was such BLISS.

      I had to get that out of me.

      Do you like my poem or are you just looking at the pictures?

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      Debby Bruck 5 years ago

      Cleaner ~ Is there a special connection between this broken sensation and the gemstone? Debby