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Too hard a love!

Updated on September 9, 2015

A hard-boiled heart of hers

makes her a hard candy

though extremely sweet

ruthlessly hard-fisted she is

in showering her love

for me,

not an iota

of either sympathy

or sentiment,

a happy hunting ground for love

her hard-bitten heart

is harbouring love

in her own heart

occasionally!

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      Bill Holland 20 months ago from Olympia, WA

      Great images...happy hunting ground for love....I like that line a lot.

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      sujaya venkatesh 20 months ago

      so encouraging tnq Bill

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      Denise McGill 20 months ago from Fresno CA

      Perhaps there is something that can soften those hardened by pain and time and experience. Warmth, cuddling, turn up the heat.

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      sujaya venkatesh 20 months ago

      exactly PTD

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      FlourishAnyway 20 months ago from USA

      I love to image of a hard-boiled heart

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      sujaya venkatesh 20 months ago

      is it not Flo

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 20 months ago from Riga, Latvia

      I totally agree my favorite line - happy hunting ground for love.

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      Shyron E Shenko 20 months ago from Texas

      sujaya, I like the lines "not an iota of either sympathy or sentiment"

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      sujaya venkatesh 20 months ago

      tnq Gyp Shy

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      Dianna Mendez 20 months ago

      Some people have a hard time displaying love.

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      sujaya venkatesh 20 months ago

      true Tea

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      Catherine Tally 20 months ago from Los Angeles

      Nicely expressed, Sujaya! Patience and kindness will warm the heart and weaken resistance to your affection. Reminds me of taming a feral cat! :)

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      C E Clark 20 months ago from North Texas

      Perhaps her heart isn't so hard-boiled towards someone else . . .

      :)

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      sujaya venkatesh 20 months ago

      nice words Au Cat

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      C E Clark 20 months ago from North Texas

      I'm with billybuc, I like that phrase too -- happy hunting ground for love.

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      sujaya venkatesh 20 months ago

      tnq Au

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      Mona Sabalones Gonzalez 19 months ago from Philippines

      I like the use of contrast and the mysterious twist at the end. Does she love him, or does she love another?

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      sujaya venkatesh 19 months ago

      ? lady

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