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Trapped - A Poem

Updated on March 6, 2013
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It's like being wrapped in a thick wool blanket

That has been soaked in a tub of water overnight

Then wrapped in another, and another, and another

Arms trapped, legs trapped, barely able to breathe

Blankets secured with straps, pulled tight like a corset

It's like a scalpel slicing through your scalp

Prying apart the flesh to let the snake inside

The snake wraps itself around your brain

Knotting its endless body over and over again

So many knots you'll never undo them

If you ever get out of the blankets

Torturous slithering of the snake

It sinks its fangs into your brain

The venom burns through tissue, turning bone into ash

Paralyzing possibility, strangling spirit

When madness copulates with despair

Using compulsion as a lubricant

It breeds a demon that destroys from the inside out

If only you had breath enough to scream and let the pain escape

© 2012 Crystal Tatum

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      Crystal Tatum 4 years ago from Georgia

      Thanks DDE

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      Devika Primić 4 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

      Trapped - A Poem beautifully written and so interesting, great thougghts here

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      Crystal Tatum 5 years ago from Georgia

      Thanks very much Mary!

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      Mary Merriment 5 years ago from Boise area, Idaho

      Very amazing and artistic writing.

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      Stacy Harris 5 years ago from Hemet, Ca

      Wow... wow... wow... you painted this so clear... I felt the pain. Great job!

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      Crystal Tatum 5 years ago from Georgia

      Thanks Debbie. I'm not a fan of snakes either!

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      Crystal Tatum 5 years ago from Georgia

      Thanks Debbie!

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 5 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      wow.. that poem is amazing.. I do not like snakes.. and picturing this made me jump back.. lol..

      love it

      sharing

      Debbie

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      Crystal Tatum 5 years ago from Georgia

      Thank you Jlava 73. That Billy is a swell guy, no?

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      Jennifer Vasconcelos 5 years ago from Cyberspace and My Own World

      Hi Crystal,

      Wow. Your poem packs quite a punch! I absolutely loved it! I found it through our mutual friend Billybuc.

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      Crystal Tatum 5 years ago from Georgia

      Billy,

      What an inspiration it is to know that you have felt these things and that you have found a way of living that is better. You inspire many with your positive hubs. And the funny ones are great too!

      Am I really in your next hub? AAGH! Be gentle - I break easy.

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      Bill Holland 5 years ago from Olympia, WA

      Well my dear, you could be writing about so many things, but the fact is that the feelings you described have been felt by most of us at one time or another. The source of those feelings really isn't important, is it? It's about the human connection, the fact that most of us feel the same things throughout our lives.

      Pedestrian this is not; what it is is a beautiful expression of the human experience.

      Stop by tomorrow for my hub; there is a rumor that you are in it. :)

      your friend,

      bill

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      Martin Kloess 5 years ago from San Francisco

      good job. thank you.

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      Crystal Tatum 5 years ago from Georgia

      Thanks for reading. I've got my eye on you too!

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      John Crowley 5 years ago from Sheffield

      Love it. Thanks Crystal, I'll be checking back for more.

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      Crystal Tatum 5 years ago from Georgia

      What does it mean to you? You can't go wrong answering that question.

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      Crystal Tatum 5 years ago from Georgia

      GoodLady, Wow thank you, I've never considered entering a competition, as I have very, very little experience writing poetry. But coming from you, I take that suggestion as a very high compliment!

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      Crazzy Kylex © 2012 5 years ago from Incredible India!

      So no cake for me :(

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      Crystal Tatum 5 years ago from Georgia

      thecrazzykylex,

      I appreciate you reading and caring enough to want to understand the poem. The thing about poetry is, it means different things to different people. Obviously, as the writer, it has a specific meaning to me. But I think it would diminish the impact of the poem to provide too many details on that. I have to say I'm flattered that you found it complicated - I'm not experienced in writing poetry at all, so I worry that my work is a bit pedestrian. But I'm doing it for the sake of expression more so than anything else. Thanks for reading!

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      Crystal Tatum 5 years ago from Georgia

      Thank you yoginijoy. I'm so glad you liked the poem. Thanks for taking time to comment.

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      yoginijoy 5 years ago from Mid-Atlantic, USA

      Phenomenal! Wow, Crystal, the imagery and the emotional expression in this poem is shockingly good and powerful! Great job! Voting up and awesome!

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      Crazzy Kylex © 2012 5 years ago from Incredible India!

      To be Honest, I really didn't get what the poem is all about. Will you please bother to explain. It's too complicated (for me) to understand.

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      Penelope Hart 5 years ago from Rome, Italy

      It's a seriously good poem. Will you submit it for publication or poetry competitions? It's a winner because of it's dramatic emotional power. Strong, painful, identifiable.

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      Crystal Tatum 5 years ago from Georgia

      Thank you so much ashleeosborn. That means a lot to me.

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      ashleeosborn 5 years ago

      Fantastic poem. Such a vivid description I could feel everything you described. Left my slightly breathless.

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      Crystal Tatum 5 years ago from Georgia

      Thanks for reading!

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      Ashish Joshi 5 years ago from India

      Nice work, Crystal...loved this poem.

      Keep it up.

      'up'

      'awesome'

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      Crystal Tatum 5 years ago from Georgia

      Thank you Nell Rose

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      Nell Rose 5 years ago from England

      Wow, that says it all exactly, amazing poem, voted up! cheers nell

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