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Trojan Horses

Updated on May 7, 2012


Looking for something that's in between
Sliding my way along the balancing beams
The fox fires inside me makes it so hard to think about it
Hard to question and doubt it
If I take a drink from the horses' mouth
Lately I seem to feel there is not a chance in hell
That I can change the world
So I am changing myself...

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      Blake Ford Hall 3 years ago from Now Rising Out of Phoenix Arizona Earthlings

      Thanks. Keep on Hubbing. Blake4d

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      Patty Kenyon 5 years ago from Ledyard, Connecticut

      Beautifully Written!!!

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      Blake Ford Hall 5 years ago from Now Rising Out of Phoenix Arizona Earthlings

      Thanx to everyone of you. Sorry I never got around to seeing your responses on this poem. Thanx KG, DR, STS, and QP1 and quicksaid. I thought nobody cared about this piece, I guess I was wrong. Keep on Hubbing. Blake4d

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      quicksaid 5 years ago

      awesome poem blake4d i love it

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      QudsiaP1 5 years ago

      Wonderfully written!!

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      Barbara 5 years ago from Stepping past clutter

      Sliding my way on balance beams

      Great line. I relate totally to the sentiment in this poem and this image lays it out. Too often I feel I will fall off the beam, which is what leads me to the realization that I must be centered, myself, if I wish to move forward.

      Thanks!

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      dreamreachout 6 years ago

      Wonderful!!

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      kimberlyslyrics 7 years ago

      Well slide your way here

      http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FYjSiXutRWA

      love that tune man, however,

      yes I have no education but poetry wise can grasp half the stuff

      this feels as though i wrote it blake but i had to replace butterflies cause what does foxfires mean or represent?

      thanks hon, sorry

      KOHH [new version-keep on humping hubs]

      ok no

      [keep on happily hubbing]

      or

      [kims overdue helping huffer]

      or

      [kim overly hates hub hoping]

      no no i got it

      if kim does not sleep within 10 minutes she's moving outside to balcony where she can not be a risk to herself? 16 fl...............

      kiss [kim is super sleepy] that's it! and I always am, except do i have to kiss the ones that hate me-ha-no-why would i b commenting

      ok this borders on stalking dude, later

      cheers

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