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Trying To Stay One Step Ahead

Updated on June 2, 2013

Makes So Much Sense

Every day has a beauty that is hidden so deep

To worry about the problems and mistakes is such a waste

Making corrections as we go is like having the answers to the test

We apply our knowledge and wait for the results

Nothing is final

Until we leave it alone

How many people see an error in their ways

Before it is too late

Relying on our instincts and memory

To do the right thing

It pays for itself a hundred times over

Rewards are everywhere

When we close our eyes and think

We are the fortunate and the wealthy

Not in material riches or status

In feelings of happiness that we create

That rise from a passion

That can only mean one thing

You are on the right track so join me

Together we uncover today what we will learn tomorrow

Listening and learning

We are always students with unlimited potential

Enjoying the fun that we see

Using our time magnificiently


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      DREAM ON 4 years ago

      shanmarie If we have fun with everything we do we can see the beauty.It's like the light that shines through the trees.We don't always see it but it is so wonderful.Thanx for reading and sharing such a nice compliment.

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      shanmarie 4 years ago

      Very thought provoking with much truth. Every single day is a new learning experience, a chance to grow, to correct a path.

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      DREAM ON 4 years ago

      I keep an open mind and leave room for any improvements that will change my life for the better.I am so happy to have friends like you.Thanx for your comment and your suggestions.

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      Devika Primić 4 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

      Great work and learning is the best way to move forward with new experiences

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      DREAM ON 4 years ago

      ladydeonne You explained it better than me.Doing all the things you mentioned gives us a good opportunity to succeed.Only time willl tell.Thanx so much for reading.

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      Deonne Anderson 4 years ago from Florence, SC

      A great poem that emphasizes the benefits of trusting our instincts/intuition to enable us to always do the right things and the joy that can be ours if we meditate and listen to our hearts. Voted up and shared

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      DREAM ON 4 years ago

      Gypsy Rose Lee It's a wonderful life.So glad to share it with it with so many amazing people.Thanx for reading and finding even more to enjoy.

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up and awesome. Flexibility is the answer and we get to enjoy more.

      P.S. Using our time magnificiently - magnificently

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      DREAM ON 4 years ago

      kidscrafts So true if we are not flexible we are like peanut brittle and easy crack into pieces.Not able to fix.Thanx for reading and sharing.

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      kidscrafts 4 years ago from Ottawa, Canada

      We should be open to learn and progress with life. It's easier to be flexible like the branches of the trees :-)