ArtsAutosBooksBusinessEducationEntertainmentFamilyFashionFoodGamesGenderHealthHolidaysHomeHubPagesPersonal FinancePetsPoliticsReligionSportsTechnologyTravel

Trying and trying...but I am done

Updated on September 8, 2015
we get lost in this maze life is
we get lost in this maze life is | Source
Source
Source

Trying to stay awake,

in this twisting maze…


Trying to run away

from this hateful place…


Trying to disappear

through a veil of dreams…


Screams is all I hear

everywhere I see

darkness is all I feel…


I am trapped inside

have nowhere to go


I am lost and afraid

I can't find the door

The walls are closing in


until I can breath and think


I know...


I am done now… I’ll stop what I used to do…

… Believe in you…

Comments

    0 of 8192 characters used
    Post Comment

    • DREAM ON profile image

      DREAM ON 

      2 years ago

      I see the power of your imagination. You are cornered and afraid. Interesting poem I would like to read more.Thank you for sharing.

    • anemixflarie profile imageAUTHOR

      Anemix 

      2 years ago

      Thank you Blessedp! I appreciate your words! I guess we have all felt like this at some point :)

    • blessedp profile image

      blessedp 

      2 years ago

      What a poem? Beautiful. I understand what you have written. I know what it is like to be trapped. You spend time trying and trying and can never break free. But when you chose to stop or give up don't because your breakthrough is near.

      I hope it works out nonetheless friend.

    • anemixflarie profile imageAUTHOR

      Anemix 

      2 years ago

      Ann, thank you for your words! :)

      Genna, I am glad you liked it :)

    • Genna East profile image

      Genna East 

      2 years ago from Massachusetts, USA

      Thought provoking, well written and with power. Well done!

    • anemixflarie profile imageAUTHOR

      Anemix 

      2 years ago

      John, thank you for reading! :) appreciate your comments

    • Jodah profile image

      John Hansen 

      2 years ago from Queensland Australia

      Powerful poem with haunting images. Thanks for sharing Ximena.

    • annart profile image

      Ann Carr 

      2 years ago from SW England

      Raw indeed; you have a rare talent for evoking emotions in few words.

    • anemixflarie profile imageAUTHOR

      Anemix 

      2 years ago

      thank you :)

    • Frank Atanacio profile image

      Frank Atanacio 

      2 years ago from Shelton

      raw.. tough.. but well written my friend :)

    working

    This website uses cookies

    As a user in the EEA, your approval is needed on a few things. To provide a better website experience, hubpages.com uses cookies (and other similar technologies) and may collect, process, and share personal data. Please choose which areas of our service you consent to our doing so.

    For more information on managing or withdrawing consents and how we handle data, visit our Privacy Policy at: https://hubpages.com/privacy-policy#gdpr

    Show Details
    Necessary
    HubPages Device IDThis is used to identify particular browsers or devices when the access the service, and is used for security reasons.
    LoginThis is necessary to sign in to the HubPages Service.
    Google RecaptchaThis is used to prevent bots and spam. (Privacy Policy)
    AkismetThis is used to detect comment spam. (Privacy Policy)
    HubPages Google AnalyticsThis is used to provide data on traffic to our website, all personally identifyable data is anonymized. (Privacy Policy)
    HubPages Traffic PixelThis is used to collect data on traffic to articles and other pages on our site. Unless you are signed in to a HubPages account, all personally identifiable information is anonymized.
    Amazon Web ServicesThis is a cloud services platform that we used to host our service. (Privacy Policy)
    CloudflareThis is a cloud CDN service that we use to efficiently deliver files required for our service to operate such as javascript, cascading style sheets, images, and videos. (Privacy Policy)
    Google Hosted LibrariesJavascript software libraries such as jQuery are loaded at endpoints on the googleapis.com or gstatic.com domains, for performance and efficiency reasons. (Privacy Policy)
    Features
    Google Custom SearchThis is feature allows you to search the site. (Privacy Policy)
    Google MapsSome articles have Google Maps embedded in them. (Privacy Policy)
    Google ChartsThis is used to display charts and graphs on articles and the author center. (Privacy Policy)
    Google AdSense Host APIThis service allows you to sign up for or associate a Google AdSense account with HubPages, so that you can earn money from ads on your articles. No data is shared unless you engage with this feature. (Privacy Policy)
    Google YouTubeSome articles have YouTube videos embedded in them. (Privacy Policy)
    VimeoSome articles have Vimeo videos embedded in them. (Privacy Policy)
    PaypalThis is used for a registered author who enrolls in the HubPages Earnings program and requests to be paid via PayPal. No data is shared with Paypal unless you engage with this feature. (Privacy Policy)
    Facebook LoginYou can use this to streamline signing up for, or signing in to your Hubpages account. No data is shared with Facebook unless you engage with this feature. (Privacy Policy)
    MavenThis supports the Maven widget and search functionality. (Privacy Policy)
    Marketing
    Google AdSenseThis is an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
    Google DoubleClickGoogle provides ad serving technology and runs an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
    Index ExchangeThis is an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
    SovrnThis is an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
    Facebook AdsThis is an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
    Amazon Unified Ad MarketplaceThis is an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
    AppNexusThis is an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
    OpenxThis is an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
    Rubicon ProjectThis is an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
    TripleLiftThis is an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
    Say MediaWe partner with Say Media to deliver ad campaigns on our sites. (Privacy Policy)
    Remarketing PixelsWe may use remarketing pixels from advertising networks such as Google AdWords, Bing Ads, and Facebook in order to advertise the HubPages Service to people that have visited our sites.
    Conversion Tracking PixelsWe may use conversion tracking pixels from advertising networks such as Google AdWords, Bing Ads, and Facebook in order to identify when an advertisement has successfully resulted in the desired action, such as signing up for the HubPages Service or publishing an article on the HubPages Service.
    Statistics
    Author Google AnalyticsThis is used to provide traffic data and reports to the authors of articles on the HubPages Service. (Privacy Policy)
    ComscoreComScore is a media measurement and analytics company providing marketing data and analytics to enterprises, media and advertising agencies, and publishers. Non-consent will result in ComScore only processing obfuscated personal data. (Privacy Policy)
    Amazon Tracking PixelSome articles display amazon products as part of the Amazon Affiliate program, this pixel provides traffic statistics for those products (Privacy Policy)