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U R EVERYTHING - Love Poem

Updated on July 29, 2011

You are my light...

The wave in the water

Makes me come undone

A whisper from your breath

Fills me up like the sun

A touch of a swallow

Brings me down like the shade

My eyes are quite blurry

Not like water, but lemonade

I want to love you like the moon comes undone

I want to hold you like the light from the sun

Be still my fire and my light

You are everything and more who lives deep in my sight

You are the moon, the sun and my every day night

When the fire falls down from the every day shore

It will take some time to crawl through the door

But I will wait til you cry and beg for more

You are destiny, love, light and much much more

I want to love you like the moon comes undone

I want to hold you like the light from the sun

Feel free my fire and my light

You are as light as a feather and my every day night

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      GPAGE 7 years ago from California

      JAMES! So nice to see you here as always...thank you for your lovely comment.

      G

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      James A Watkins 7 years ago from Chicago

      This poem is lovely, my dear. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it.

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      GPAGE 7 years ago from California

      thanx Jess! Glad u enjoyed ; G

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      Jess Killmenow 7 years ago from Nowheresville, Eastern United States

      Playful and romantic! Thank you

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      GPAGE 7 years ago from California

      seasoning....thanks for the comment! Nice to see you here......just started to read some of your hubs. I have family in England.......also LOVE David Bowie!

      Best, GPAGE

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      seasoning 7 years ago

      brilliant i love the pictures to go with the poem also

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      GPAGE 7 years ago from California

      habee.......thanx for the compliment! I really appreciate you stopping by.

      Best, G

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      GPAGE 7 years ago from California

      Moneylady! Thank you so much for this nice and supportive comment! Best, G

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      Holle Abee 7 years ago from Georgia

      Good job, G! Love the use of original and creative similes!

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      Moneylady 7 years ago from Texas

      This is very well done. I'm looking forward to reading more of your work.

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      GPAGE 7 years ago from California

      Kaie....great to have you here! So glad you are being LOVED! ; G

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      GPAGE 7 years ago from California

      Hey cheaptrick! So glad you liked my poem.....always wonderful to see you here! G

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      Kaie Arwen 7 years ago

      One word "beautiful."

      Everyone should have this person........ makes me awfully glad that I do!

      Best to you always!

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      cheaptrick 7 years ago from the bridge of sighs

      G,What a cool and refreshing poem...Like Lemonade!

      I read so much dark poetry on HP that this is a great uplifting validating piece.

      ...peace...lol

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      GPAGE 7 years ago from California

      chrismarva....thank you for stopping in! Best, GPAGE

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      GPAGE 7 years ago from California

      James....I'm so glad that you liked my words in this lyrical poem. I may write something about you at sea......I always wonder what it is like to be you out there on this adventure! I hope you are having fun tonight. G

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      chrismarva 7 years ago

      Very nice, I love it.

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      James J Mills 7 years ago from Northern California

      The wave in the water makes me come undone....... Very nice, I really like this.... It leaves me longing. Best JM

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      GPAGE 7 years ago from California

      HappyHer.......so glad you enjoyed it! LOVE to write about LOVE....G

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      HappyHer 7 years ago from Cleveland, OH

      I'm lost in the feelings, this is such a moving hub. "I want to love you like the moon comes undone" - that's most excellent!

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      GPAGE 7 years ago from California

      Hey IV! Welcome home! Happy New Year to you 2!!!....Thank you for bringing your positive self and your positive words here! I missed u 2.....Looking forward to hearing about your adventures this holiday season! Best, G

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      Sylvia Van Velzer 7 years ago from Hawaii

      Ooooh, love it GPage! I feel a song, do you? I missed you, and am glad to be back! Happy New Year!!! It's gonna be a great 2010 for you!!!