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Modern Poetry : William Carlos Williams
Modern Poetry and William Carlos Williams
William Carlos Williams gave modern poetry short, sharp injections of real life in the form of minimalist poems.
A doctor for near on 50 years in Rutherford, New Jersey, William Carlos Williams also wrote poems, scribbling and typing his snatches of life in between delivering babies and looking after mostly working class families.
His most famous poems include The Red Wheelbarrow and This Is Just To Say, the latter a poem about plums in an icebox. It was this focus on ordinary everyday things that made Williams so different to anyone else writing at the time.
'The only universal...is the local...' wrote the poet, meaning that his poetic truths could be found within a 20 mile radius of New York, as he went about his business as a physician. He wanted his poems to be truly American as opposed to European which is what he thought contemporaries such as T.S.Eliot and Ezra Pound were producing.
I'd like to explore the influences behind this idea and take a closer look at several poems.
Williams came into contact with Ezra Pound who encouraged him to simplify his work. Briefly Williams became known as an Imagist but later distanced himself to become an Objectivist.
'Anything is good material for poetry. Anything. I've said it time and time again.'
If you look through the poems of Spring and All (1923), the first book to bring recognition to William Carlos Williams, you'll find all sorts on display. A wheelbarrow, a rose, a ball game, a faucet, a pot of flowers, a farmer, a hospital - they're all given similar treatment - the poet uses his imagination to take them out of grounded reality and bring 'many broken things into a dance.'
Many of these poems are short and narrow and look 'thin' on the page. They have lean lines, odd silences,hesitations, observations 'rooted in particulars.'
He can spot a flock of birds, some trees, a person on the street and this will form the irritation around which the pearl is made, layer on layer. What's striking is the attention to detail, the spontaneous reaction to a small local event, the imagination taking over, making at times a surreal or emotional connection.
The Red Wheelbarrow
so much depends
a red wheel
glazed with rain
beside the white
This little poem is responsible for a whole shift in the poetic consciousness of America and the English speaking world, but it took a good 25 years for its influence to be felt.
When it was first published, in 1923, it challenged people's idea of what a poem should be, how it should appear on the page. It also took root in the minds of many young poets and influenced people like Louis Zukofsky, Charles Olson, Denise Levertov, Allen Ginsberg and Robert Creeley.
I love the zen like quality of this poem. The simple observation of a wheelbarrow in somebody's garden and the importance it holds for someone, for a whole world, becomes a focal point of existence. How come 'so much depends' on such an object?
The form of the poem is the field within which language plays. That play has a rhythm and Williams wanted the rhythms to be expressions of local speech, what he heard each day. You can for instance picture a friend of the poet's musing on the importance of that red wheelbarrow and starting a conversation...'so much depends upon..'
His poetic imagination turned a mundane scene into a poem.
In addition to his work as a doctor, Williams was also actively assessing the artistic scene and became friends with photographers and artists of the time. People like Charles Demuth, Alfred Stieglitz and Marcel Duchamp gave him new ways to think about the form of his poetry, the visual impact they made on the page.
Inspired by the modernists approach to life and art - he attended the avant-garde exhibition at the 1913 Armory Show - he sought to create a fresh kind of poetry, breaking away from the old traditions.
Williams wanted spontaneity and real life in his verse and for the form to be 'always new, irregular.'
It's interesting to note that Williams and artist Charles Demuth were life-long friends. One of Demuth's paintings - Red Chimneys - was finished in 1921, a couple of years before Williams's
famous The Red Wheelbarrow poem was published. Coincidence or was there a direct link between image and poem?
When Williams wrote his poem The Great Figure, based on his seeing a fire engine (No 5) speed past him one rainy night - Demuth painted I Saw the Figure 5 in Gold and dedicated it to his friend.
William Carlos Williams versus T.S. Eliot
When T.S. Eliot's The Wasteland came out in 1922 William Carlos Williams felt that the world of poetry had taken a step backward - into the classroom - and that this was 'the great catastrophe....'
Eliot had turned his back on America, developing a more formal European expression. Williams wrote that 'My theory of poetry...arises from immediate environment, and in the case of my environment, America...'
This Is Just To say
I have eaten
that were in
you were probably
they were delicious
and so cold
This is an excellent introduction to William Carlos Williams. I've got this book and it includes all his famous short poems plus his later longer works.
One of his most famous, from his Collected Poems (1934) is full of suggestion. The title itself could be a sort of casual note to a lover or friend following a night's stay. You can picture the perpetrator guiltily eating those juicy plums one after the other whilst upstairs someone sleeps on.
The language reflects an ordinary moment of real time, a thought bubble rising from a kitchen somewhere in New Jersey on a late Saturday morning. The form allows the words to flow initially - the act has taken place - only the end stanza causes the reader to hesitate and perhaps slightly regret having eaten them all!
Again, the poem is open ended, spontaneous, a casual remark given this uniquely minimal form.
As the cat
the top of
first the right
then the hind
into the pit of
Analysis of Poem
Although this poem is essentially about a cat stepping carefully over a closet - a jamcloset - it also is open to a different interpretation. To start with you could argue that the whole poem is a metaphor for someone dealing with a sticky situation (hence jamcloset), having to tread slowly, softly, because of potential danger.
But the use of the word 'pit' related to the flowerpot could mean that the person has gone from the frying pan into the fire. The precarious situation they find themselves in is far from over. It's open ended.
There's a simplicity about many of Williams's poems. The language is accessible despite unusual forms and line breaks. Note also how his opening word here gets the poem going, the use of an adverb 'as', a sort of casual approach. He captures another domestic scene almost like an artist sketching.
Would this poem be as successful if it was in a different form? For example, which works best:
As the cat climbed over
the top of the jamcloset
over the top
of the jamcloset
As the cat
the top of
a) these lines are too long - the cat is rushed, you don't get the hesitation.
b) these lines are too short, abrupt and artificial.
c) these are more balanced, giving realistic movement to the cat.
It's the anarchy of poverty
delights me, the old
yellow wooden house indented
among the new brick tenements
Or a cast-iron balcony
with panels showing oak branches
in full leaf. It fits
the dress of the children
reflecting every stage and
custom of necessity -
Chimneys, roofs, fences of
wood and metal in an unfenced
age and enclosing next to
nothing at all: the old man
in a sweater and soft black
hat who sweeps the sidewalk -
his own ten feet of it
in a wind that fitfully
turning his corner has
overwhelmed the entire city
This five stanza poem gives us Williams's ideas about the poor. He sees the incongruous mix of old with new, and could be using sarcasm when he says 'It's the anarchy of poverty delights'. Is poverty delightful? Most certainly not in real life but in the context of this poem it forces the reader to stop and think and question.
The poem is full of imagery, typical Williams painting a picture as his stream of consciousness moves ahead. I can see the old man with back bent sweeping the dust out into the wind which is then taken across the whole city.
Four lines per stanza indicate regular time and within this constant the juxtaposed elements of poverty and society - from nothing to an entire city, old wooden house and new brick dwellings - the poet is showing us that the belongings of the poor,next to nothing, suit even what the children are wearing.
Technically, it's in free verse, has enjambment plus alliteration - ...'in a sweater and soft black/hat who sweeps the sidewalk...' and is left open ended with no full stop, a pointer toward poverty being endless, going on despite the efforts of politicians to end it.
In addition to his poetry Williams also wrote novels, short stories and essays. An anti-novel appeared in 1923 The Great American Novel and a book of essays In the American Grain was published in 1925.
William Carlos Williams : Poetry Books
1914 The Wanderer
1917 Al Que Quiere!
1921 Sour Grapes
1923 Spring and All
1934 Collected Poems
1935 An Early Martyr
1936 Adam and Eve and the City
1938 The Complete Collected Poems
1941 The Broken Span
1944 The Wedge
1948 The Clouds
1950 The Collected Later Poems
1954 The Desert Music
1955 Journey to Love
1962 Pictures from Brueghel
William Carlos Williams's poems, especially his earlier work, broke new ground and helped poetry move into the modern era.
His poetry is still fresh, taken out of the air of New Jersey on an ordinary working day and transformed into profound poetic sketches. Full of vivid imagery and reflecting the American way of life which was so important to him, they were in complete contrast to T.S.Eliot's work and other poets writing at the time.
Many still do not like his poems, seeing them as shallow and with no artistic merit or poetic skill. I think to enjoy his work you have to put aside notions of classic rhyming poetry and go with the idea of spontaneity, of the poet using as few words as possible to create this field of local character.
With Williams you can learn about spontaneity, how to observe a small detail, an object, a trait, and give it new life with a twist of the imagination.
When asked how he managed to write poetry whilst working as a doctor he replied....'it has fluttered before me for a moment, a phrase which I quickly write down on anything at hand, any piece of paper I can grab.'
© 2014 Andrew Spacey