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Unexplainable Sense

Updated on May 20, 2012

Walking into one of my friend 'new' house I have this strong sense that is very unexplainable. Death...many to as hundreds of death in that home---not my imagination but a strong sense of feeling I felt accordingly. Chills run through my spine and I really felt that I was walking in a shadow. I told my friend, "Al, I don't like the house! It just really creeps me out!" And Al was like, "Don't think too much girl! Cool out! I show you my backyard!" And when we got to the backyard, I could smell the dead. The foul smell fumed the yard to the point where I gag. I asked Al if he could smell that? And he asked, "what smell?" and I replied, "of a dead body" and Al replied, "Are you joking? I don't smell anything...lets go get something to eat!" And I replied, "No...I think I'm gonna go home." When Al heard that I wanted to go home Al shouted, "NO!" and the door swung shut behind me.

I glance at Al and asked why? And he replied, "because I want you" with a devil look on his face. The texture of his body has change into one of the most gruesome kind of creature that ever exist in the world. I fell back off balance on the floor struggle in fear...that gruesome creature strive its way at me as I got up running to the door. I tried to get out...but I couldn't...then all of a sudden a white flash of light appeared before my eyes. In my mind I'm thinking am I dead? Am I in heaven?

Later I heard a voice calling me...sounded very familiar...a familiar voice and as I woke up I realize it was the voice of my boyfriend. He said I fell asleep in the book room and I said, "Oh!" I later realize I was holding a book and it was one of ghost story book that I wrote in creative writing class in high school. I learned that I was dreaming about what I read and it was an amazing yet a horrific journey during a 30 minute nap!


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      chanroth 5 years ago from California, USA

      Hi Christoper, S. and Raciniwa, thank you all very much! ^_^

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      raciniwa 5 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

      it's one of a kind experience...i was really thinking for it to be real...i'm glad it's not...

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      Christopher Dapo and S. 5 years ago from Havelock, NC

      S. says - That's a creepy story! I believe in ghosts myself. I'm glad it was only a dream, thanks for sharing!

      - S.

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      chanroth 5 years ago from California, USA

      Hello everyone thank you for reading, voting and commenting. Hehe...I have experience so much scary cat nap, now I just don't want to take a nap in noon time but after a tiresome day..I just happen to. Thank you! ^_^

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      Martin Kloess 5 years ago from San Francisco

      my house puts on a show - sorry no ghosts

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      moonlake 5 years ago from America

      Very scary. Good story. I hate those scary cat naps I've had a few. Voted Up.

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      leigh anns page 5 years ago from New Jersey

      That was a scary cat nap! Great story. I enjoyed reading.

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      Joyce Haragsim 5 years ago from Southern Nevada

      You had me as well. Maybe you could carry on with this story because the begining is good.

      Voted up and aewsome, see very good, Joyce.

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      Lori J Latimer 5 years ago from The River Valley, Arkansas

      Ha ha! You had me. Unique. Voted up!

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      Jim Higgins 5 years ago from Eugene, Oregon

      Scary stuff alright! What a dream. Glad you woke up in time. UP!

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      Christopher Dapo and S. 5 years ago from Havelock, NC

      Wonderful job, Chanroth! Our sensibilities can truely get played on by our subconcious in our nightmares, which you've captured perfectly here - bravo!

      - Chris

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 5 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up and awesome. That was one crazy dream that could scare anyone. You told it very well and scared me too especially when the guy turned into a gruesome creature.