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Unforeseen Formation of Mental Objects

Updated on June 7, 2011

So long farewell I will see you around

I turned to walk my feet hit the ground

Thunder and lightning hit the pavement

As it echoed along my current enslavement

Roaring its sound trembling below my feet

Every step taken the temperature arose in heat

Nothing to fear as I knew the end was here

One lonely droplet that trickled in form of a tear


Displayed a line across the screen

Captured and recorded onto a graph

A heart beat that beats and shown to seen

Waves and intervals on my behalf


She passes his sight with cheek and appeal

Her hair flows just like the cold icy river

Setting him on a level of her element

Rising him to his feet and taking her hand

They walk under the sky with melodic cadence

Both feet striking the sand at the same time

Leaving imprints of their footprints as they walk

The sounds of the waves crashing against each other

The wind slowly shifting and releasing its whisper



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      Nikki Wicked 7 years ago from Louisiana

      yea...lets hope that rapture talk and end of the world stuff aint really happening lol

    • bellawritter23 profile image

      Erica Sanchez 7 years ago from California

      Lol its very gloomy here in cali as well. Hot yesterday and about to rain weird and weird!!

    • Nikkij504gurl profile image

      Nikki Wicked 7 years ago from Louisiana

      its hailing now. its crazy. its been hot as balls lately and its hailing...

    • bellawritter23 profile image

      Erica Sanchez 7 years ago from California

      It was all just random. Had no boundries or rhyme scheme just words I put together felt random yesterday lol thanks sunshine. lol I dislike thunder and lightning as well. :)

      smiles :)


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      Nikki Wicked 7 years ago from Louisiana

      and boy is it thundering and lightning by me right now. Just made me jump one was so loud, and the power flickered for a split second, looked like lightning struck inside on the cieling. any who. I liked this though it seemed a bit off track at the end, you switched it up from rhyming to not rhyming, and kinda went from a dark ending (in the beginning) to a happier ending( at the end) holding hands on a beach of some sort, but in the end, its still the end...

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      Erica Sanchez 7 years ago from California

      Mysterious, I suppose it was noticeable that I went astray for a moment I feel very pleased to know I was noticed! Thank you for stopping by as always a pleasure as well!!

      smiles :)


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      MysteriousOne 7 years ago

      Excellent piece,bella! Welcome back!

      Loved the last line..." the wind slowly shifting and releasing its whisper"....Great and voted up!

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      Erica Sanchez 7 years ago from California

      Sub, I took a little break! Lol yes I love pictures I suppose and they love me at times :) It is my under my pink hood resting on my desk!! Thanks for stopping by!

      Bumpsy, Thank you I took a mini vacation you can say!!

      Jaded, Lol I think so do I but passion yes indeed! Thank you!

      smiles :)


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      JadedLove 7 years ago

      That was awesome Bella. I love the last two lines. i have a thing for winds whispering and waves crashing. I feel the passion greatly in your heart. Thank you for sharing such beauty.

      Johnny Love

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      Bumpsysmum 7 years ago from Cambridgeshire

      Great stuff, Bellawritter, good to see you back :-)

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      James W. Nelson 7 years ago from eastern North Dakota

      Good job, Bellawritter23, haven't seen you for awhile. You seem to have no end for ideas for profile pics...let's see, I think you are lying very comfortably on a mat, kind of in the shade, and then you turned the pic to appear upside down, but I do think that's you under the pink hood.


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