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Unknown Lover

Updated on March 18, 2012

Lay me down gently in your warm rain,

Let seductive madness rend my brain,

In your vibrant field,

say so that I may yield,

with these uneven words.

This evening I feel as a naughty night-bird

sailing through warm passionate winds,

north, east, west, south of sin,

fulfilling pleasures decree,

devoid of the moral man

and resident mockery.

Under the white veiled cool jeweled moon

voices of angels sweep and swoon.

My caressing gentle hands,


your deep passionate hot fire

and the pentacle of carnal desire.

Spend time with me, I do admire.

Delicately, I stroke your fertile wet lands

in time, and with the inspiration of harpist hands,

Pointed tongue,

I have begun

to search your essence,

natural fragrance,

sweeping elegance.

You quiver with anticipation, knowing

I will fulfill imagination,



weak kneed,

you turn to me,

I will not deceive,

show favor to me,

I wish to feel loves

sacred story

connecting pounding hearts in

majestic purple glory.

I kiss you from the tips of your lovely hair,

to soft toe,

as delicate as the feathered weeping willow,

I cast away inhibition without care

leaving them in the prison of lonely despair

I remove your diamond shaped panties fitted around your waist

with the strength of my curled tongue,

balanced with grace.

Slowly, I catch your eye as passion stirs from inside,

my velvet tongue works, from inner knee, to thigh,

your body yearns in wanton reply,

More, more, closer yet

moist, wet, fulfill, you will not regret,

sacred and swollen,

let the gush of my river flow free

faster please,

unleash me,

tongue tempting a bodily surge,

up and down, to and fro,

gliding ,



on the verge,

shattering the sacred seal of

longing desire and urge................


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    8 years ago

    yes i am so liking this really very much

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    8 years ago

    Nice piece son. like a stream almost

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    Black Lilly 

    9 years ago from London

    That's like fresh air.

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    9 years ago

    very sexy poem,a vivid description of lovers in the midst of passion

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    9 years ago

    what connie,,,said.

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    Am I dead, yet? 

    9 years ago

    w00t! Michael, I love reading your poems like these. The use of words and the meanings set forth an explosive mental picture. 'Unknown lover' is someone--all familiar to many of us. Extremely well done.

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    Connie Fiala 

    9 years ago

    phew! i gotta take a cold shower & head off to work

    -your words are so sensual & vivid Gary

    You're making everone hot under the collar!

    great work, as usual!

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    Michael Achilles 

    9 years ago

    I hope that I am not excused from HP for this......Thanks, Kimberly and comments are sincerely appreciated!

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    Jess Killmenow 

    9 years ago from Nowheresville, Eastern United States

    My, what a naughty night bird! Pentacle. Now I'm hungry for something wet and salty. Thanks :)

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    9 years ago

    ah, um, ol, er, ah, ya, grrrr, da, du, beautiful holy sh**, loved it xo, now this is my favorite-printing it


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