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Unknown Strangers

Updated on January 11, 2012

How do You Say It ?

I met an unknown stranger, my curiousity was piqued

With words I tried to make contact

thats all that I had seeked.

My actions were mistaken, for more than what it was

I didn't mean no harm,

just contact because

I was just as lonely, maybe more so than you

but it's hard to put into words

You know that this is true

So please Unknown Stranger

Please don't take me wrong

once I learn to play Guitar

I 'll make you famous with a song


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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      So... you are the riddle... in a complex package of emotions ..that fit into a pattern of reasonings.

      love that if you do .. you do express your true self but only in harsh terms .. maybe that is why I am turmoil within .. trying to find the way to release my thought s as words.!

      LOL

      Michael

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      Lissette 4 years ago from Central Florida

      Enigma- I think that is an awesome and unique compliment. Thank you.

      You are going to school for English and Writing. If writing is that far into your core, you can take breaks from it but the words would eventually torment you until you freed them. You may not chose to publish them but you will have to write. It is in our nature.

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      yes .. a beautiful smile ..

      I am going to a community college here in Pueblo, I will graduate with my Associates degree in the Fall, then transfer to the local University to obtain my Bachelors degree in English ..with a emphasis in writing.. upon when I then seek my Masters.. (phew) it has been tough working at night and school in the day ...but I am driven to succeed.

      You are a great writer as he wrote and you are an enigma also my sweet.. so I can see why he would profile you..

      Michael

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      Lissette 4 years ago from Central Florida

      You are welcome. My smile shows the life in me not the things I have seen. I am stubborn and didn't want to let anything take it.

      Yes, I had it cut off. I miss my warrior braid but I like short hair too. I couldn't put it up anyway.

      I was surprised that this person wanted to write that without even knowing me.

      School? What are you taking?

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Lissette my sweet, thank you for the picture .. love that smile .. wonder where the darkness comes from in your work with such a bright smile.. but as we know we all have darkness inside ..some suppress it better than others .. so you cut that long beautiful hair..? I think a woman with long hair ..put up is very sexy..! it comes from my childhood, but that hub was very entertaining and it was an insight into your work from his perspective, you are very talented in your writing.. and hope to see more of your work . I must go now ..school ..but hope to reply to your reply .LOL

      Michael

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      Lissette 4 years ago from Central Florida

      To be curious is natural. Putting a face to a name is not an intrusion. I am scattered here and there in some of my writings. Usually the ones dealing with events and races. Someone decided to write about me once a while ago. I look a little different now since I donated my hair but faces don't change.

      https://hubpages.com/literature/The-World-of-Undis...

      He left an s out of my name but my simple face is there.

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Lissette .. yes .. intentions are almost always mistaken .. I wrote this a long time ago ..it seems .. thank you for reading .. I am very curious as to what you look like .. but I do not want to intrude upon your privacy ..

      Michael

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      Lissette 4 years ago from Central Florida

      Your writing rings with truth. Its a shame. So many people lose friendships because they are always assuming an intent that may not be there. I can go on and on about this since my hobbies often surround me with people more than a decade younger than me and they are always mistaking my kindness for advances.

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      KatrineDalMonte 5 years ago

      Beautiful like all your poems. This one has a deep meaning. Loneliness...Voted up and awesome :-)

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      sg, thank you. I'm very glad you like it.

      @Audrey, thanks for your kind words.

      @ Caroline and Nikki, I'm working on them guitar lessons.

      Love you both. if not for you two inspiring me with your great poetry I could not write mine.

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      Audrey Howitt 5 years ago from California

      You have a lot of potential--keep at it!! Nice job on this!

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      Sheila Brown 5 years ago from Southern Oklahoma

      Hello cleaner3! You are so talented! Your poetry is beautiful and also has such meaning! Voted up and beautiful!

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      Caroline Marie 5 years ago

      Hi Michael love the last two lines. Very sweet poem. Keep writing, I can see your poetry growing into greater and greater things.

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Do you think so, perhaps...

      The wishes we all have

      if only some would come true

      But the world isn't perfect

      thats why some of us are blue

      I was trying to say

      I have my wishes too

      But to have you as a follower

      inspires me to write for you

      Thank you,Nicole, much love

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      Nikki Wicked 5 years ago from Louisiana

      could i be that Unknown Stranger perhaps? This was beautiful. I loved the last part.

      "So please Unknown Stranger

      Please don't take me wrong

      once I learn to play Guitar

      I 'll make you famous with a song"

      I love guitar wish i could play myself.