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Until Then - A Poem

Updated on July 7, 2017
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Somewhere


over the rainbow....


I never look


For a pot a of gold


Nor angel with shiny silver tongue,


But colour,


other than


This grey world of mine

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Somewhere...


Over the Rainbow...


It is hope


I put above


And dreams


that I lean


And cuddling


Passing through all nights

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The Meaning Behind The Poem

The poem actually talking about hope to find the love one, whose do not have to be rich, gorgeous or know how to speak in sweet way to woman.

It also speak about hope this love one will be someone whose respecting his wife as partner in his life and give her freedom to become who she is.

He have to be someone whose will bring her life to another level and not the one whose will sink her down into misery.

And if this kind of person is not existed then she decided to be alone for the rest of her life.

I hope it make sense. ^_^

So if what you offer only;


Another dull house,


with extra dungeon


I better stick and sit tight


Inside this room,


Until the door to another realm


Open Wide


And time for me


To enjoy another life


Until then, my love...


Until then...

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    Freya Cesare 5 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Thank you, Voronwe. It is very nice of you. :)

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    Freya Cesare 5 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Hi, Blaise. I'm just helpless romantic, as always. Lol. Thank you for your support, dear.

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    Voronwe 5 years ago

    A very tender poem! Of so much depth and emotion. The meaning was so poignant...thank you.

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    Fehl Dungo 5 years ago from close to you...

    A beautifully expression of one true love. You always do it my friend :)

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    Freya Cesare 5 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Salam, Sis Uzma. Thank you, alhamdullilah.

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    Uzma Shaheen Bhatti 5 years ago from Lahore,Pakistan

    beautiful poem freya,pics are adding the beauty to poem.voting up and shring.may ALLAH bless you.

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    Freya Cesare 5 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Thank you, xstatic. ^_^

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    Jim Higgins 5 years ago from Eugene, Oregon

    Very nice and poignant poem and the photos work well with it.

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    Freya Cesare 5 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Eiddwenn & Movie Master: Hello. Thank you very much. I'm glad you like it. ^_^

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    Movie Master 5 years ago from United Kingdom

    A beautiful poem and pictures Freya thank you.

    Voting up and sending my best wishes Lesley

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    Eiddwen 5 years ago from Wales

    Oh I loved this one Freya; beautiufl words and images to balance perfectly.

    Take care my friend and I wish you a wonderful daya

    Eddy.

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    Freya Cesare 5 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Always Exloring: Hi, Rubby. Thank you.

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    Freya Cesare 5 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Writer 20 & Deborah Brooks, thank you. ^_^

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    Ruby Jean Fuller 5 years ago from Southern Illinois

    Hello Freya, Loved your poetry..Cheers.

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    Deborah Brooks Langford 5 years ago from Brownsville,TX

    this a powerful and beautiful poem.. voted up

    Blessings

    Debbie

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    Joyce Haragsim 5 years ago from Southern Nevada

    This is a wonderful poem, loved it. Voted up and beautiful.

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    Freya Cesare 5 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Sunny: Thank you

    Rahul324: Thank you for your nice comment, Rahul. I'm glad you like it

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    Jessee R 5 years ago from Gurgaon, India

    beautiful poem with a message of undying love

    love doesn't reside in palaces and coins and other extravaganzas. It resides in the soul, in the heart, with a hope which never dies

    up! and shared and beautiful!

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    Sunnie Day 5 years ago

    Beautiful poem! Thank you!