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Heaven or Hell

Updated on June 13, 2015

Figures on the clouds

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Vision of an angel

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This is my second entry into Frank Atanacio's Poetry Month.

I wrote this after I read the following verse by tobusiness.

Up There or Down There

God has Angels, Satan has minions

Only I can

Decide

It is up to me, it is

Now or never

My thought is should I float to Heaven, or

End it in Hell.

Roads will lead the proper

Course which

Years of my life have written.

Ghost Riders in the Sky

Which direction do you choose?

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      The Examiner-1 2 years ago

      Thank you again Michael-Milec. :-)

      Have a nice day.

      Kevin

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      Michael-Milec 2 years ago

      Indeed. A timeless message, The God and His mercy.

      Voted up and beautiful.

      Peace with us.

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      The Examiner-1 2 years ago

      Thank you Peachy. You got me curious so I had to look and I did not do that but that is a good idea. Thank you for reading it and what you thought.

      Have a nice day. :-)

      Kevin

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      peachy 2 years ago from Home Sweet Home

      wow, you can even think of the words for each alphabets, awesome

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      Jolyn 2 years ago

      That really capetrus the spirit of it. Thanks for posting.

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      The Examiner-1 3 years ago

      That is how I do see it Deb but, strangely, I wrote it as a verse when I was competing in Frank Atanacio's poem. Otherwise I do not know whether I would have. Maybe it was a sign from above.

      Kevin

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      Deb Hirt 3 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      It is so true. It really is all in how you have lived your life.

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      The Examiner-1 3 years ago

      Thank you, I was writing that only for fun in Frank Atanacio's poem. I have not written since elementary school and I just gave it a shot. If that is not your style then there is another one you might like better. Have you heard of Sunny River? Select a theme and write about your butterflies. For someone who wishes that she could write it, your profile name already sounds poetic.

      I am glad that you liked it. If your poems are on here I will look for them.

      Kevin

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      Paula 3 years ago from The Midwest, USA

      Hello Kevin,

      You have a neat piece here, and it is very thought provoking. It keeps you thinking after reading it, and makes me wonder more where you are coming from in it. I wish I could write poetry! I have done only a very small amount over time, and it comes when it does and not before.

      Thanks again for sharing, and I am glad you got to be such a part of that challenge. While I did not participate, I did see some very neat poems.

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      The Examiner-1 3 years ago

      Thank you manatita44. Peace to you too.

      Kevin

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      manatita44 3 years ago from london

      Very beautiful. Much peace.

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      The Examiner-1 3 years ago

      Is that what it is? I just write the poems, I do not know which types I am writing. Thanks again for your votes.

      Kevin

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      Eiddwen 3 years ago from Wales

      A brilliant acrostic and so glad you worked your way through the problems. I vote up and share onto my Fb pages.

      Enjoy your day.

      Eddy.

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      The Examiner-1 3 years ago

      Thanks for the comment Phyllis. I was determined to figure out why it was not. I finally did!

      Speaking of tip box, I hope that you got my post about the malware. I figure the Amazon message was unimportant, I just wondered why. Thanks.

      Kevin

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      The Examiner-1 3 years ago

      Thank you very much Frank. I really appreciate that and it was certainly unexpected.

      Kevin

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      Phyllis Doyle Burns 3 years ago from High desert of Nevada.

      Very good job, Kevin. I admire your stamina in sticking to it till you got it published and featured. Well done.

      When I had my tip box, I often got that message also about an Amazon capsule in first position. It always went away after I entered my first capsule. It is just a quirk of the system.

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      Frank Atanacio 3 years ago from Shelton

      oh my goodness.. this was amazing!!!!!!

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      The Examiner-1 3 years ago

      Oh I should have known. I will take the PC apart and look for them. (grin)

      I published the verse and added the photos/video one at a time later. I appreciate the approval and votes.

      Kevin

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      The Examiner-1 3 years ago

      I am glad that I got it in also. I added the photos/video after I did. Thank you for the votes Shyron.

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      Jo Alexis-Hagues 3 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

      Kevin, Faith is right, there be gremlins in them there HP machinery. :)

      I'm glad you've managed to get the poem posted. Nicely done, up and sharing.

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      Shyron E Shenko 3 years ago from Texas

      Glad you got this one in, would not want to miss it.

      Voted up and shared

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      The Examiner-1 3 years ago

      I keep trying one photo at a time now but but it seems that I will have to look for others.

      By the way, do you know why several of my 'start a Hubs' would have a warning that I have an Amazon, eBay, or link in the first position when I do not use them and all I have is the title?

      Kevin

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      Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

      Bless your heart. Things can get a bit tricky here on HP at times until we figure things out. I know I am still finding out new things each day after two years! LOL

      Have a wonderful week ahead. I need to get busy publishing something myself! LOL

      Blessings

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      The Examiner-1 3 years ago

      Thank you for understanding Faith. At first I thought that I was duplicating something in my own Hub. I finally found out that it was somewhere on the Internet. I had to keep deleting the URL and get the words correct in my verse.

      I will say having fun. The recent 2-3 which I have read I broke out laughing because I became tongue tied. Thinking it was me, I read the lines about 3-4 times.

      Kevin

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      Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

      Oh, Kevin, I understand about such issues and I am sorry you had such a time. However, I am thrilled you have entered a second time! I think it is perfect following tobusiness, but it would be great following wherever you felt you needed to follow. We are all just having fun during this wonderful month of poetry!

      Blessings

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      The Examiner-1 3 years ago

      Thank you Faith. I would have entered it a couple of weeks ago but I was having problems getting it published. Jodah's poem? Does it follow his better than tobusiness? I felt like writing it after I read hers.

      Kevin

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      The Examiner-1 3 years ago

      Thank you. The original was not too much thought.

      Kevin

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      The Examiner-1 3 years ago

      The pics seemed okay but when I put in the captions there was an 'Overly promotional' warning. I had simply removed them the the first time since the main problem was with my poem duplicating something on the Internet. When I deleted the original and there was no more duplicate warning, I was just glad to publish it.

      It seems to be featured now. I have been out all day.

      Kevin

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      Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

      Profound poem. I did not realize it was part of Frank's challenge until I read Jodah's poem. Yes, you can add photos at any time.

      Up and more, tweeting, pinning and sharing

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 3 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Wow Kevin, This is deep and thoughtful. Well done!

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      John Hansen 3 years ago from Queensland Australia

      You may have to persist and try to add a couple of pics or additional info to get it featured Kevin.

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      The Examiner-1 3 years ago

      Thank you Jodah. Amazing, it is not even featured yet. I had to change it - twice, I think, - and the photos , etc. were not included because of problems. I was just glad to get it published. If it stays that is.

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      John Hansen 3 years ago from Queensland Australia

      Good acrostic verse Kevin to add to the challenge. Glad you managed to get it published.