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Upon The Sunset (poem)

Updated on January 27, 2016

Upon the sunset song of long ago

A deep caress of moments once they knew

Within their eyes remains that special glow

When vast forevers always seemed too few


Upon the sunset whispers of a dream

Each heartbeat shared its turn within life’s dance

Theirs were the source of wonder’s fullest gleam

Theirs were the wonders treasures of romance


Soft teardrops leave their mark upon a page

A memory amid the Joys and pain

The times when flames of passion freely rage

And kisses had all meaning to explain


Upon the sunset date has come to close

And all draws to a lasting kiss goodnight

Which scents the winds of sleep which gently blows

Two lovers toward their everlasting light


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      shanmarie 17 months ago

      Beautiful. Always a romantic treat to read your work.

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      picklesandrufus 4 years ago from Virginia Beach, Va

      You are a real natural with poetry! lovely

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      Elena 4 years ago from London, UK

      Very sweet poem. Thanks.

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      Deb Hirt 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      So beautiful a picture with each stroke of the pen...

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      Victor W. Kwok 4 years ago from Hawaii

      A really amazing poem.

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      Mary Craig 4 years ago from New York

      Awesome from start to finish. Love, romance, images (they've all said this before me here in the comments section) but, that's what's there toghether with the beauty of your words.

      Voted up, awesome, and beautiful.

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up and beautiful. Loved the sentiments and great imagery. Great video.

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      Ruby Jean Richert 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Beautiful. I love Al Green...

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      Dianna Mendez 4 years ago

      This setting is so romantic. I love your poem and thoughts on making the perfect date through sunset's light.

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      Faith Reaper 4 years ago from southern USA

      Very beautiful as always, Mh! Love Al Green too.

      God bless, Faith Reaper

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      FlourishAnyway 4 years ago from USA

      Vivid imagery and touching.

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      Jennifer 4 years ago from Lost...In Video Games

      This was just beautiful! I could imagine a beautiful sunset, with the skies fading from orange, to pink, to blues and then night. Just awesome imagery! Voted it up!