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Venus Eclipse

Updated on June 4, 2012
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Planet of Dreams

Planet of Dreams lost

broken hopes of calm beauty

Passing - still intrigues.


Millions gaze up

once in a lifetime to see

the twisted sister.


You dashed dreams of old

No solace or comfort found

no one dare explore.


Planet of promise

no more we seek you out

Pass, eclipse, farewell.



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    • Deborah Brooks profile image

      Deborah Brooks Langford 5 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      beautiful Poems... really spoke to me

      voted up

      Debbie

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      Lizam1 5 years ago from Victoria BC

      Thank you Deborah.

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 5 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up and awesome. Love your planet of dreams.

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      Lizam1 5 years ago from Victoria BC

      Thanks for reading and commenting Gypsy Rose Lee. It is cloudy in BC so I will have to watch via video - the next passing is 100 years from now:-)

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      Michele Travis 5 years ago from U.S.A. Ohio

      Loved you poem, thank you for sharing not only the poem but the picture. Voted up!

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      Lizam1 5 years ago from Victoria BC

      Thanks Michelle appreciate you reading. Agree the picture is lovely.

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      Dianna Mendez 5 years ago

      Great reflection of the planet and what it represents from history.

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      Lizam1 5 years ago from Victoria BC

      Thanks for reading Teaches12345 - it was interesting to research a little.

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