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Vibrations of A Heartbreak

Updated on June 11, 2012



Lost illusions amid the narrows of darkness

Emptiness resonates with wistful vastness

Concussions unseen clots unknown

Seeds of life ripped, unsown

Endless weeping laced with red

Anatomy trembles, each touch dread

Invisible shrapnels dwell on the soul

Unwavering pain leaves man a ghoul

Shattered remains with sharp edges

Pierce through the chest bestowing eternal ridges

Incessant mourns silently are shed

Lifelessness in horizons monotony unsaid

In a grave of doom, staked for evils sake

Lie the Vibrations Of a Heartbreak



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      flashmakeit 4 years ago from usa

      Awesome poem and it makes me almost tremble every time I read it!!

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      donabhatt 4 years ago from Hyderabad

      wow....amazing. I am especially amazed with the use of biological terms. I myself sometimes use few words like ligation, thaw, lyse...but then always correct them thinking they will sound weird to somebody not from this field. But I am impressed..

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      Maria D'Alessandro 4 years ago from Melbourne Australia

      "Seeds of life ripped,unsown" Wow Rahul, I relate to the vibration of a heartbreak for sure after reading this masterpiece. You have dug deeply into the source of your emotions and have wrung our every bit of feeling that resides there like pain, disappointment and hopelessness commonly experienced with any kind of heartbreak. This is one of your best poems Rahul because there is a lot of honesty and sincerity here. Voted up for sure.

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 4 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      You make my heart beat fast.. ..lol so beautiful.. you only get better at writing.. I agree with Maria this is one of your best. and I think all of them are so great.. Of course I am partial to you my son..

      Blessings and sharing

      Debbie

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      Martin Kloess 4 years ago from San Francisco

      Thank you for this insight of a heart

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      Brandon Martin 4 years ago from Colorado, USA

      NICE! I love it!

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      Nithya Venkat 4 years ago from Dubai

      It makes my heart break to read this. Awesome. Voted up.

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      Martie Coetser 4 years ago from South Africa

      "Invisible shrapnels dwell on the soul" - Indeed, forever, like everything in space....

      So sorry to know you know the vibrations of a heartbreak, Rahul :(

      Voted up and touching....

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      Frank Atanacio 4 years ago from Shelton

      Rahul this was pretty good found it a bit gritty and somewhat terrifying I loved it!

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      BeyondMax 4 years ago from Sydney, Australia

      Beautiful, deep and very expressive, wow. Swept me off my feet by it's utter power!

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      Amy Becherer 4 years ago from St. Louis, MO

      I've come to know the truth in "what goes up, must come down". The higher the flight, the more treacherous the fall. At this moment, I wonder if it's worth it. But, tomorrow may be another story. If it was easy for humans to turn away from the best part of life, many would. Hope springs eternal. Always, Rahul, your words grab the guts of the matter. Profound, true and said like the artist you are.

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      bhargvi sharma 4 years ago from jammu ( India)

      Awesome... I loved it... :D

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      Scott Biddulph 4 years ago from Gainesville Georgia

      Beautifully poetic...I loved it! WP

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      Jessee R 4 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      Thank you Flash! I am glad you liked it!

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      Jessee R 4 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      Using biological terms in proper positions can really make wonders! i am glad that you are pleased with my work Dona!

      Thank you!!

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      Jessee R 4 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      What a great comment my Lady! Thank you for your kindness! I am glad that you are pleased!

      I like sharing what I have faced and I am sorry for I know what you have been through!

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      Jessee R 4 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      Hi Debbie! ya you're partial.. m your son after all hehe!

      Thank you so much

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      Jessee R 4 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      Thanks Mhatter! I am glad you liked it!

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      Jessee R 4 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      Thanks Brandon! Much appreciated!

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      Jessee R 4 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      I am sorry I made you feel that way Vellur! Thanks for connecting

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      Jessee R 4 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      Sometimes.... heavy things happen at an early stage in life..

      Thanks so Much Martie

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      Jessee R 4 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      Thanks Frank! I love the review you five to my work! Short and apt always!

      I am glad you liked it!

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      Jessee R 4 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      Max! thank you so much for your everlasting support my friend!

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      Jessee R 4 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      What an insightful comment Amy! I am glad you connected in such a way to my work!

      Thank you so much for your everlasting kindness! :)

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      Jessee R 4 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      Thank you so much Bhargvi :)

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      Jessee R 4 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      Thank you so much WP! Much Appreciated :)

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      lovedoctor926 4 years ago

      Powerful imagery! A good poet creates a picture in the mind of the reader as well as an emotion in the heart and you have done this very nicely my friend.

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      Movie Master 4 years ago from United Kingdom

      Heartbreak described perfectly - awesome poetry.

      Voted up/awesome

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      Jessee R 4 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      Thank you for your utter kindness Love! I am glad you connected to my work!

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      Jessee R 4 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      Thank you Lesley! It is much appreciated:)

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      epigramman 4 years ago

      .....I wish I could write words like these - in fact I can't. Nice work, Sir of Ravishing Rahul who is eye candy for the ladies with lofty displays of world class poetic writing talent - ole!!!!!! lake erie time 7:35pm

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      This gets you all three Rahul voted up, awesome and beautiful. So expressive it pulls at the heartstrings.

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      Girish puri 4 years ago from NCR , INDIA

      deep , touching and invites heart break ( after reading )....lol, awesome piece of poetry, voted up

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      Jessee R 4 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      Thank you my Lord for such nice and kind words of appreciation

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      Jessee R 4 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      I am glad I expressed my self well.... Thank you Rasma

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      Jessee R 4 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      Thanks Girish... I am glad you liked my work...

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      hi rah..how can you be sooo good in poetry and writing and in Math as well? :P You're such a talented person.

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      Dr Anupma Srivastava 4 years ago from India

      Beautiful poem with amazing thoughts. It is one of the best descriptive poems that contain such biological words to describe feelings in a better way.

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      Jessee R 4 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      Hi Spy! I am not good at any of these... hehe... Just love them a lot! Thank you for connecting :)

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      Jessee R 4 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      Thank you for the kind words Anupma! I am glad you liked my work!!

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      Shauna L Bowling 4 years ago from Central Florida

      My brother, it hurts me each time I read of your pain. You are so poetic in voicing it tho. I know you're finding beauty again. And, with what you've been through, that's truly amazing.

      You are a beautiful soul, my friend. No one has ever been able to spoil that. Hang on to who you are. Evil can never make a lasting impression on the goodness of you. You may get knicked and set back for a bit, but evil cannot penetrate and live inside pure goodness. And that, my friend describes you to a tee. Pure goodness!

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      Jessee R 4 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      I feel so nice and warm when I read your comment on my writing Shauna!

      Beautiful people like You come out of no where and support some one who has suffered, like me! I am honored to be in such company sister! Evil will not penetrate me until I have the protective shields of those who love my.. are my own

      Thank you

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      Richard Ricky Hale 4 years ago from West Virginia

      Big thumbs up Rahul. Awesome poem. You hit this one spot on. Love your references back to the heart. You have great talents my friend. Always a joy reading your poetry. Heartache is never easy to go through. Mending the heart may be the hardest. Best wishes.

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      Jessee R 4 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      Hi Lyric! Nice to see you! I am glad you liked my work! Heartache is something which flows as blood from the eyes

      Thank you

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      HattieMattieMae 4 years ago from Limburg, Netherlands

      Very well written! :)

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      Jessee R 4 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      thanks hattie

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      Ruchira 4 years ago from United States

      oh gosh...this poor heart had to go through so much of agony. bless the heart!!

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      Anamika S 4 years ago from Mumbai - Maharashtra, India

      Looks like you have experienced a heart break too... Well, I have! And I really know how it feels.

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      Vinaya Ghimire 4 years ago from Nepal

      Rahul,

      sadly your composition evoked painful memories.

      I can so much relate your words.

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      Jessee R 4 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      thanks for connecting and blessing the hear Ruchira! Kindness well received

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      Jessee R 4 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      Thanks for Connecting Anamika! It is sad to know you have faced a heart break.. yea i have faced it too.. on different fronts..

      wish you luck and warmth

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      Jessee R 4 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      Vinaya... if you wish to talk about something... feel free..

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      Angelme566 4 years ago

      Dost you described a heart break very well , actually , is such word can ever describe a heart break , the pain that it gives..

      As expected , lines are impressive ..

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      Stacy Harris 4 years ago from Hemet, Ca

      Wow - this is very strong and speaks volumes of truth on how it truly does feel. Well done!

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      Angela Brummer 4 years ago from Lincoln, Nebraska

      This is simply amazing such beauty but, pain. I am so happy that this day brings me no broken heart!

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      DAWNEMARS 4 years ago from The Edge of a Forest in Europe

      Powerful poetry. You are very gifted. Thank you for sharing it with us. Voted beautiful and awesome. More poems please!

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      Shining Irish Eyes 4 years ago from Upstate, New York

      Dearest Friend,

      It hurts my heart to read your heart hurts. I do have to say how poetically you bring the situation and the emotion to the reader. You are a gifted we writer and I so appreciate your having shared this. Creative use of symbolism comparisons as well.

      I am sending you prayers, blue skies and happy ending.

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      Jessee R 4 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      Thanks so much Angel! Your support dost always keeps me going

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      Jessee R 4 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      Stacy! Thank you so much for connecting and commenting:)

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      Jessee R 4 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      I am glad for you Angela! Sweet people like you must never know pain

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      Jessee R 4 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      You are truly kind Dawne! I am grateful for being in such presence!

      Thank you so much

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      Jessee R 4 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      Hi Beckie! To know the vibrations of a heart break is sad...but I have the power to bear and move on! This power comes from the support from kind people like you

      Thank you for your kind warmheartedness

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      onlooker 4 years ago

      Very intense, Rahul. Often light at the end of the tunnel is a mere illusion to a broken heart. Brilliantly written. Thank you.

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      Jessee R 4 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      Love your statement onlooker... thank you for the words of deep insight on my work

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      deergha 4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Rahul your poem is mesmerizing thoroughly and in truest of sense. it is breaking my heart inside and i can hear the vibrations clear and loud. its a reward in itself to read you. voted up and shared.

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      Jessee R 4 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      Dghbrh... thank you so much.. It is a readers accolade to be read by such great people like you :)

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Wow, powerful poem with sharp words describing heartbreak! Excellent job..... Voted up!

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      Cut The Bullshit 4 years ago from All Over

      Nice - very talented you are

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      Jessee R 4 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      Thank you so much LaThing... i am glad you liked my work

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      Jessee R 4 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      Thanks for the kindness Ranzi :)

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