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Victory And Defeat

Updated on April 13, 2011

Victory and Defeat

On that day……….

He broke through the cold and riverie death

To claim my soul that was distant to death

With every quaking moment of his pain

My soul he did regain

He gave his word has a seal and promise

That no matter the cost his life he gave

That he laid it down my life to reclaim

Even thou the stones were gathered

They stood and watched has he wrote

With the finger of God

Today is the day the soul was reformed

From the dust of hell that hold all so deep

He went there and put hell under his feet

No more longing for something out of reach

Now we sing a song of Victory and Defeat

©2010/3/29SharonSmith

 

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    SwiftlyClean 6 years ago from Texas

    Thanks MrDspade for your visit and comment.

    Peace!

    Sharon Smith

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    MrDSpade2 6 years ago

    Beautifully written.

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    SwiftlyClean 7 years ago from Texas

    Hello 2besure,Thanks for your visit and nice comment.

    I'm happy for Gods inspiration.

    God Bless and Peace!

    Sharon Smith

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    SwiftlyClean 7 years ago from Texas

    With out God we can do nothing, Suny51( Hear oh Isreal the Lord God is ONE!)

    Thanks for your visit!

    Peace!

    Sharon Smith

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    Pamela Lipscomb 7 years ago from Charlotte, North Carolina

    The words you write flow so sweetly.

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    suny51 7 years ago

    each morning when i open my eyes i say to myself: i, not events, have the power to make me happy or unhappy today. i can choose which it shall be. yesterday is dead, tomorrow hasn’t arrived yet. i have just one day, today, and i’m going to be happy in it.God Bless you and yours.

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    SwiftlyClean 7 years ago from Texas

    Hello Quill Welcome to my page,and thanks for you graceful comment,Thanks to God for being a great Teacher and giving me a heart to listen and share.

    Warm Blessing and Hugs to you aswell.

    Sharon Smith

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    "Quill" 7 years ago

    Filled to the brim with wisdom and insight, a blessed read... well done

    Blessings and Hugs

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    SwiftlyClean 7 years ago from Texas

    Hello Alladream74,thanks for reading and leaving a comment.

    and also being a support.

    God Bless!

    Sharon Smith

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    Victor Mavedzenge 7 years ago from Oakland, California

    Thanks for sharing and supporting others!

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    SwiftlyClean 7 years ago from Texas

    Hello tonymac04, and thanks for reading.I think it will be posted as a devotional that it is.

    God Bless!

    Sharon Smith

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    Tony McGregor 7 years ago from South Africa

    A lovely devotional poem with interesting insights. Thanks so much for sharing it with us.

    Love and peace

    Tony

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    SwiftlyClean 7 years ago from Texas

    Hello Keiranthapa,thanks for your visit and comment as well.

    God Bless!

    Sharon Smith

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    keiranthapa 7 years ago from Darjeeling

    Very nice. Keep them coming SwiftlyClean.

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    SwiftlyClean 7 years ago from Texas

    Hello DREAM ON,thanks for your visit to my hub,May your Easter be a Bless one as well.

    Sharon Smith

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    DREAM ON 7 years ago

    Very moving hub.May your Easter be a happy one.

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    SwiftlyClean 7 years ago from Texas

    Hello Raymond Tremain,I'm glad that it was blessing to you.

    God loves you as well

    I wish you a Bless Easter.

    Thanks for your visit

    Sharon Smith

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    Raymond Tremain 7 years ago from Metro Manila Philippines

    YES, YES, this is a great poem Sharon, the words so penatrating into the soul.

    Have a Blessed Easter

    God loves you

    Ramon

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    SwiftlyClean 7 years ago from Texas

    Hello Micky Dee, I can trust you will always show up...:)

    You are as right as the mail

    Gods Blessings to you!

    Sharon Smith

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    Micky Dee 7 years ago

    Very, very nice SwiftlyClean! Thanks for a great poem!

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    SwiftlyClean 7 years ago from Texas

    Hello lmmartin,Thanks to you for breaking bread with me.May you be Blessed as well.

    God Bless!

    Sharon Smith

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    lmmartin 7 years ago from Alberta and Florida

    A lovely devotional, full of gratitude and grace. Thanks for touching my spirit. Lynda

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