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What I Think When I Read You : A Poem

Updated on July 5, 2017

What I think when I read you

Not really easy to describe

I feel some short of déjà vu

But kind of hard to grasp


I see the drawing

While I’m reading your mind

So when you were sleeping

I hold your fear and put it into mine


To see

To understand

To be here

In the place where you stand


Oh, I know how hard this life already been

Only just such a sweet thought won’t be able to kick in

But unless, I know what that’s all mean

For you, I wish all will change when you finally understand how to tracing yourself in


Don’t walk under that storm, Brother

Even if you don’t feel much bother

The door to the house of happiness opens widely

If you can choose where to find it, wisely


Don’t darkening your own eyes

When the light try to put sunshine in your heart

Don’t push it into disguise

When you couldn’t able to see why everything had to fall apart


Take a rest

Release your tension

It is not a race

Please help your heart with his mission


Life indeed is not easy task to fulfill


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    Freya Cesare 7 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    ^_^ Thank you, Pintails. Inshaallah. I really wish that can be true. Thank you.

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    pintails7886 7 years ago from Memphis TN

    well they fit very well. Keep writing, and inshaa Allah you should talk with a publisher. I think you could get somewhere great with it.

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    Freya Cesare 7 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    as Í enjoying yours too, Poetlorraine. Thank you. ^_^

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    poetlorraine 7 years ago

    am enjoying your work.... thanks

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    Freya Cesare 7 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    "While you are sleeping..." ^_^

    This words already used by other before, but really fit with the circumstance that is why I used it. I'm glad you like it. Thank you, for the flattering comment.

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    pintails7886 7 years ago from Memphis TN

    this is a very beautiful poem, and the pictures that go with it, make it really great. You are very talented indeed.