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When I Really Need to Cry : A Poem

Updated on July 6, 2017

I'm stand still

wondering

why my heart feel uncomfortable?


Like ocean it's being ripple inside

Wave take away the sand and

Bring it back again over and over

when the tide getting ebb, some is taken away


Longing

Is this it?


I take it in my heart with 1000 joy

hope it soar and light the sky

But suddenly winter fairy reach inside

My world become frozen


Speechless...

Something steal my tongue

Left me by my own


I close my eyes and I feel it

The arm of sadness embracing me around

Like blanket of ice

it is freeze my tears


Why it did not let me cry?

When tears is helper for reducing pain

When emotion in jeopardy to turn into beast inside

I need it more than anything else


Please God, allow me to cry.

I'm afraid of myself when I couldn't cry.

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    Micky Dee 7 years ago

    Hi Freya Cesare. I enjoyed this very much. I think I was in the mood. Thank you.

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    Freya Cesare 7 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Your welcome, Micky Dee. You are in the same mood with me then. :)

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    christinecook 7 years ago

    you really touch me with your wisdom,for even the ability to cry is a gift,we all need from time to time. Strange I never thought about how much better one can feel after a good cry.

    Peace Be With You,Freya

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    Freya Cesare 7 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Thank you, again. You are so sweet person. :)

    Peace be with you too, Christine.

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    poetlorraine 7 years ago

    what is your first language, you are a good poet

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    Karen Russell 7 years ago

    WE ALL NEED TO RELEASE OUR TEARS SOMETIMES, THANKS FOR A GOOD READ...

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    Freya Cesare 7 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    poetlorraine and Karen Thank you. :).

    My first language is Indonesia. My English getting better since I start writing in English but my speaking is worst. Hahaha....

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    Mystique1957 7 years ago from Caracas-Venezuela

    Excellent poem, Freya! The words run so smoothly and they`re so heartfelt... You transmit much humility and kindness through this work. I truly loved it!

    Thumbs up!

    warm regards and blessings,

    Al

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    ladyonthemirror 7 years ago from Indonesia

    I am your biggest fans, Sista. Indeed! your writings always are amazing

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    Freya Cesare 7 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Mystique thank you. It's mean alot since I really enjoy your works. Thank you. ^_^ warm regard and blessing for you too.

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    Freya Cesare 7 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Ladyinthemirror, you always make me happy with your sweet words, thank you Sis. But I'm also your fans too!

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    Moulik Mistry 7 years ago from Burdwan, West Bengal, India

    So wonderful, very deep and emotive...

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    Freya Cesare 7 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Thank you. I'm glad you like it. ^_^

    Thank you for put comment on this hub. I really appreciate it.

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    Lightuponlight 7 years ago

    Ameen!!!

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    Freya Cesare 7 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Yes, Ameen. I keep crying in many occasion, and that's really help. ^_^ Thank you for stopping by, Lightuponlight.

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    gulnazahmad 7 years ago from Pakistan

    very deep with strong emotions. A passionate one:(

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    Freya Cesare 7 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Oh, don't be :(. Deep and strong emotion is good because with experiencing it we knew that we are still human being with beautiful heart. Once a while we will feel this in many stage in our life and good company always help. You and all Hubbers in here already become my good company, thank you very much for that. ^_^

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    Doug Turner Jr. 6 years ago

    Beautiful yet chilling. Thanks for sharing your emotions.

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    Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Hi, welcome to my hub. I am glad you like it. Thank you, Doug. :)

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    gulnazahmad 6 years ago from Pakistan

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    Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Ah, dear. What are you trying to say? LOL

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    Cracknutcase 6 years ago from India,bangalore

    Ur writing certainly has a depth in it so Good work.. But if I may say so,thr r a few grammatical mistakes that u need to correct.. Way to go gurl.. Keep going :)

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    Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Ah, yes. It is my early attempt writing in English. Still have so many mistake. I am better today, even still always make mistake here and there. Thank you, Cracknutcase. :)

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    Cracknutcase 6 years ago from India,bangalore

    Mistakes make us grow.. So Carry on, Keep writing :)

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    pennyofheaven 6 years ago from New Zealand

    Awww what a beautiful poem. We do need to cry! Thank you!

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    ahorseback 6 years ago

    Ok , Freya , here it comes , are you ready ? This will make the tears come , I'll sqeeze them out one by one. A big , no a BIG hugg........

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    Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Cracknutcase:

    Thank you, dear. :) I will, if it is God's will.

    pennyofheaven:

    Hi, Penny. Thank you for reading this, dear. I am glad you like it. ^_^

    ahorseback:

    LOL. You are so funny, dear. Big hug for you too! Thank you. :)

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    Mohan Kumar 6 years ago from UK

    Wow, Freya this gripped me in sadness and such emotion. 'Please God, allow me to cry.

    I'm afraid of myself when I couldn't cry' powerful words even though you say its your early attempt at writing in English. Keep writing and I'll keep reading. Big hugs.

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    Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Docmo, hi. welcome to my Hub. Yes, this is my early poem. Indeed I really put the whole emotion in this because at the time my heart is broken, very bad. Funny how my best works always came out in the time when my heart feel hurt the most. Anyway, thank you for reading. I am glad you like it. I will visit you soon. :)

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    Micky Dee 6 years ago

    Yes my dear Freya. I think I was. If you should be unhappy I could not be happy knowing. God bless you dear Freya.

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    acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

    Heartfelt words and so completely full of emotion. Beautiful.

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    Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Micky Dee, aww! You are so sweet. Thank you, King Micky. :)

    Acaetna: Thank you, Dear. I am glad you like it. :)

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    jihan 6 years ago

    I love it...

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    Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Thank you, Jihan. I'm glad you like it. ^^

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    nasseralabdali 5 years ago from Saudi Arabia

    Sheding tears relieves pain, despair, and pessimism; that's the essence of your evoking poem. I like this hub! voted Up & beautiful. I will be glad if you visit my hubs: Lost In Love, Ashely & A Morsel of Stones.Nasser

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    Freya Cesare 5 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Thank you, nasseralabdali^^. I will visit your hub as soon as I have chance to do that.

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    mottiandbander 5 years ago from Chd

    Nice poem . I cry when something hurts me and believe me it helps me a lot. It reduces the sorrow and i become little light.

    Thanks for the poem.

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    Freya Cesare 5 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Thank you, Mottiandbander, for your nice comment and your visit to my hub. ^^

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    Capedium 5 years ago from Texas.

    Nice.. Stunning..

    I think am going to cry.. lol!

    Riding..I really like this poem

    Just wanting to let it out

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    Freya Cesare 5 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Thank you, Capedium. I'm glad you like it. ^^

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    Maurice Wisdom Bishop 5 years ago from San Tan Valley

    They say crying is good for the soul. Great poem. Much love and respect.

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    Freya Cesare 5 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Thank you, Wisdom. I really appreciate your support. :)

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