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Through The Window Of Our Soul : A Poem For AHORSEBACK

Updated on July 7, 2017
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Dear Readers,

Did you meet Ahorseback aka Ed? I met him at my Hub at first and was thought he is a woman, because he has very sensitive way to speak through his works which several times had reminded me about thinking out of the box and walking around the obstacles to solve problem in my mind. Then I know, I meet good man and great father whose I thought everyone have to meet. So, through this Hub, My dear friends, let me introducing you to Ed.

Part of this Hub had written in his Hub's comment capsule as an expression of what I think about him. Please enjoy.

Freya

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I feel you, Dad

Your wisdom and gentle words

From across the sea I smell

The rain that falling on your land

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You brought me with you

Passing through the times and experiencing your life

Visiting many beautiful places

Diving into your enchanting memories

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Through a window for our soul

Beyond the distant, beyond the forms

We live side by side in the moment

Standing in each others world

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I see you, oh my Poetic Father

Your kindness and great compassionate heart

From across the sea I breathe

The air which surrounding your being

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You let me take a peek into your mind

Resounding your precious history

Allowing me to harvesting lessons in every single step you ever took

Trying to walk while wearing your shoes

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Through this window; for you and me

Beyond the differences, beyond the similarities

We live side by side in the moment

Learning about each others world

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I was stood on the rooftop of my life

Looking for a sign of existence;

An ancient wisdom

Power of true knowledge

Understanding of Humanity

Tolerance of Love

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Turning the world’s pages, I sighed

Everything in the world seems upside down;

Head become feet

Tummy turned over into back

Hand being used as leg

Faces is gone and all I able to see only everyone’s knees

This Earth is not a great place to have a life, I thought

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But from your place I seen

The light sparkling calmly

Humming a very beautiful melody

Soaring a dream of peaceful dawn

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How world will become without a voice like yours?


How world will turn to be, without someone who always listen before he speak, just like what you always did?


How this Earth will survive without someone who has ability to squeezing the essence of life into wonderful song like you showed me?


To be hear and to be ponder by humanity

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On your side I've seen

The last hope inside Pandora’s Box

Hidden in everyone’s misery

Waiting to be found and to be free

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We need more people like you, my Father

We need more and more and more

Because great future of humanity is lies inside your gentle words

And spreading through your wonderful wisdom


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I heard you, my dear friend

Hopes and dreams inside your words

From my rooftop I fly

Far, trying to reach the world

Finale efforts?

Well, I truly hope not

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    3angelspower 6 years ago from Cornwall, Ontario

    I'm speechless! Very impressive collection of wild horses. Great comparison.. Wonderful choice of words, style, and imagery. You have my vote on this my friend.

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    Uriel 6 years ago from Lebanon

    Freya this was epic, resonating with so much that emotion and words. it has a sense on life, a beauty within it. Divine!

    freya i can almost hear you reading it out loud with a very timid yet powerful voice. The words are simply too strong and beautifully versed!Amazing, i sure will check ahorseback's profile :D:D

    As always missing you a lot :D how are stuff on your side of the fence?

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    Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Hello, 3angelspower. Your name making me curious about the reason you chose it. Will take a peek on your profile as soon as possible. Thank you very much. (\^o^/ Yaiy! Happy for great started of comment) I'm glad you like it. ^^ Nice to meet you here. :)

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    Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Uriel dear, that is very flattering comment! Thank you, beautiful one. (\^o^/ Again; second yaiy! hehehe)

    Yes, you should check on Ahorseback profile indeed to know what I mean about him. Ahorseback is a father everyone should have; the voice of wisdom.

    Thank you, my sister. The stuff here become too overloaded. But I holding on very carefully even with many jabs targeting on my patient. LOL. The struggling life as usual.

    Big hug and lots of kisses.

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    Maja Dezulovic 6 years ago from Johannesburg, South Africa

    Beautiful poetry and pictures. This is something I really like about Hubpages - the prospect of meeting others, be they close by or across the Globe, who touch your heart in such a way.

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    Amy Becherer 6 years ago from St. Louis, MO

    Dear one, The beauty of the words you give to your poetic father reflect the beauty in your soul. Incredibly profound, it is the dream of many biological fathers they never attain. You have given your symbolic father the greatest gift of all. You are the epitome of love, generosity and the spirit that inspires all artistic endeavors, Freya. Magnificent!

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    Movie Master 6 years ago from United Kingdom

    Hello Freya, how happy I am to be following you and to the delights of your words, I found you in the comments on many of ahorsebacks hubs, we have mutual respect for a special person in ahorseback. I love the photos as well, thank you.

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    Ruby Jean Fuller 6 years ago from Southern Illinois

    Freya, This is so beautiful. The pictures are magnificent. I'm on my way to see ahorseback. Thank you.

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    Annie Fenn 6 years ago from Australia

    A very heartfelt and graceful tribute to a man full heart and grace. And you are so right we do need more and more and more such compassionate people, oh what a wonderful place the world would be then.

    "Through this window; for you and me

    Beyond the differences, beyond the similarities

    We live side by side in the moment

    Learning about each others world"

    This is so beautiful and describes the friendships that transcend distance, colour and creed. Such friendships are found here on hubpages.

    Thank you for sharing your beautiful tribute, including the amazing images, to a wonderful man.

    I can imagine ahorseback blushing, but we all know your words are true. I doubt there are many around these parts who have not been touched by his warmth.

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    agusfanani 6 years ago from Indonesia

    What another beautiful poem you've written, Freya. The words you chose for this poem really in harmony with those wonderful pictures.

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    Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Majadez: Hello, Mahadez. Nice to meet you. Yes, this is the best gift Hub Pages has give us. They give us place to share our thought and meet great friends in creative way, just like I miss you. Thank you, Majadez. ^^

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    Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Amy Becherer: Ah Amy, you making me blushing right now! That is really sweet and kind words of you. I'm speechless right now. wow! Thank you very much, dear. \^o^/

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    Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Always Exploring: Dear Ruby, when you meet him, you will know what I mean. ^^ Thank you, dear.

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    Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Fennelseed: Hello, Fennelseed. Welcome to my Hub.

    Yes, Ahorseback, no matter who he think he is; we already read his works, listen to his wisdom, understand his heart and love his beautiful soul. So far, I never meet someone like him here at Hub Pages and that make him special. I'm glad you agree with me. ^^

    Thank you very much. ^^

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    Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Agus Fanani: Salam, Brother.

    Well, all I do is just written the feeling Ahorseback had generated in me; inspiration from his existence. More beauty I feel, more beautiful the words I can call to coming out of my mind.

    I'm glad you like it, bro.

    Thank you very much. ^^

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    SilverGenes 6 years ago

    Freya this is powerful and beautiful love song for a beloved poetic father - magnificent!

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    ahorseback 6 years ago

    Ahh Freya , How did I miss this , forgive me for not keeping up ! And as is with my own true Blood daughter .You're beauty , you're yearning for better ways , for a better understanding and for trying to bring and hold all of humanity "together" under an aura of love and understanding , humbles me . As with the beauty of my Brandy ,I am awe struck with your loyalties and your beautiful soul. And these pictures !!! You have given me a great gift and I will never forget it, my beautiful Muslim daughter!!!! One great big hug for you each and every day! ....Ed

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    Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Silvergenes: Thank you, dear. I'm glad you like it. ^^

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    Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Ahorseback: You are far too late! :( (just kidding) hehehe

    You deserve of every words, Dad. ^^ The honour is mine, to be allowed to know and shares thought with you. ^^

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    ahorseback 6 years ago

    Freya , Again I just read this slowly and the pictures and words move me to no end.! As you may know, I can be, and am a bit melencholy in my writing ! But, from the first time I heard your words I was moved to a place of needing to share an understanding , a touching of emotions , of reaching out to console and to understand. And to touch [figuratively ]the beauty of a soul as yours....:-}Bless you for answering that call!.....:-}

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    Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    It is in you, Father.

    The feeling and the emotion.

    Like mirror to your soul,

    I just reflecting what's inside your being.

    It might be my voice which already touch your thought,

    But it is your heart which listen and recognized the hope.

    So it is you...

    In you...

    All along.

    The compassionate heart,

    The caring words,

    The gentle wisdom.

    My respected friend named Ed. ^^

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    Micky Dee 5 years ago

    So beautiful Freya. Please keep writing these lovely poems like this.

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    Freya Cesare 5 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    I will, King Micky. Thank you for your support. ^^

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