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Waiting For The Comet

Updated on April 1, 2013

On a field
Strewn with thorns
She lays
Many years
Glancing up at the lonely stars
Waiting for the comet,
Just out of orbit,
To swim up into the fallopian tubes to fertilize the egg!!.

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      That would be nice and great;)

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 4 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      James.. yes it would.. blessings my friend

      deb

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      Yes my dear I am:) It would be great if we could watch them together;)

      Many Blessings!

      James

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 4 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      wow I am waiting for that comet too.. great poem.. I am excited .. I hope I get to see some of it.. are you going to watch it?

      Debbie

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      @ ignugent17,Thanks for the visit.I really appreciate that.

      Have a nice day!

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      ignugent17 4 years ago

      Interesting poem. It really connects to life and everything. :-)

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      @Eiddwen.Thanks my chwaer so much for the visit and vote .Have a nice day!

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      Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

      A great share brawd ad here's to so many m0re to follow. Here's wishing you a great day and this gem voted up.

      Eddy.

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      @ Mhatter99.Thanks my friend for the visit and comment.You are really a very nice person.

      Have a nice day!

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      Martin Kloess 4 years ago from San Francisco

      Thank you for this.